>"Oh come on, officer! It's not rape if he didn't say no!" >"Sure, he may have been tied up and gagged, but I didn't hear him say the word 'no', so it's fine!"
>"you sure it's all right down here, clover?"
>i have zero artistic skill
then go get some!
ITS TIME... FOR MY POUND OF FLESH!
*mating presses Martlet*
>"Oh come on, officer! It's not rape if he didn't say no!" >"Sure, he may have been tied up and gagged, but I didn't hear him say the word 'no', so it's fine!"
>"..." >"..." >"Cole, I-" >"Don't bother." >"We'll talk about the fifty half naked cowboy humans once we get out of here." >"O-okay." >The whole dark world adventure is laced with the most awkward atmosphere that could possibly exist in reality.
Awkward? Increasingly more horny more like. DRY!Kanako probably drew more than just ram ranch cowboys, she probably drew fox/kitsune chicks too, some of them even resemble Kanako herself. There are even some where they were getting it on with humans too. Cole's gonna have some wild dreams after this adventure.
>"oh god... cole we should find a different path." >"why?" >"w-w-well... i uh... i-i took a FEW fetish comissions and uh..." >kanako looks back down the dark alleyway, a shiver goes down her spine >"i-i-i REALLY dont want to have that conversation." >"... it cant be that bad. its just stuff like bondage, right?" >kanako's heart drops >"... right?" >kanako cant come up with the words to explain herself as cole develops a slightly disgusted look >"... alright, we'll find a way around." >about two rooms away >"but its nothing illegal, right?" >"god no."
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>they look around and slowly come to the grim realization that there is no other path
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>"oh god... cole we should find a different path." >"why?" >"w-w-well... i uh... i-i took a FEW fetish comissions and uh..." >kanako looks back down the dark alleyway, a shiver goes down her spine >"i-i-i REALLY dont want to have that conversation." >"... it cant be that bad. its just stuff like bondage, right?" >kanako's heart drops >"... right?" >kanako cant come up with the words to explain herself as cole develops a slightly disgusted look >"... alright, we'll find a way around." >about two rooms away >"but its nothing illegal, right?" >"god no."
who's the area secret boss
5 months ago
Anonymous
Strangely familiar looking human obsessed fox but REALLY tall
5 months ago
Anonymous
Delta So Sorry
Kanako's highest paying commssioner, his OC has so much disgusting fetish porn every other darkner fears him
5 months ago
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>Cole is so fricking disgusted at what he sees that you can't spare this secret boss. >You have to kill it. >Kanako doesn't remotely judge and even encourages you to hurt it as much as possible. >You think she WANTS to draw half of the things she had to for him? No, man, it was only for the money. >A weight has been cleared from Kanako's mind once all is said and done. She gains an extra HP and DEF boost for the rest of the game.
5 months ago
Anonymous
The most impressive thing someone could do with deltasorry is turn him into an actual character like Toby did with the fedora wearing brony Papyrus prototype
5 months ago
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>turn him into an actual character
The source material is so tainted, I don't think you could remotely do that and make it land.
5 months ago
Anonymous
its her own personal fetish work.
5 months ago
Anonymous
She'd definitely have an injection, medical, and experimentation fetish.
I just wonder if clover or her would be the subject of the drawings.
5 months ago
Anonymous
Herself
5 months ago
Anonymous
Bird Clover?
Literally just Kanako's idealized version of Cole as a monster.
5 months ago
Anonymous
Kanako's cringe OC she made when she was like 12 years old
>but just something embarrassing that kanako's scared of turning into a darkner.
Kanako's insanely cringe sonic/sailor moon OC who has all the powers, is stupidly over designed and has a comically edgy backstory?
It could be the secret boss of the chapter
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>the two make it through >"alright. i only have one question." >"o-oh god..." >"why the frick was THAT in a much higher quality than everything else IN THE ENTIRE DARK WORLD?" >"do you have to ask?" >cole goes quiet >"well ok, its obvious why." >"if you tell anyone you're dead. i keep it a secret, so you do the same ok?"
5 months ago
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>Cole's face when he sees what Kanako was trying to hide
Hear me out here >Kanako draws Clover as a bird-monster, what they'd look like if they were Martlet's actual kid. >Boss of that chapter is that drawing, discarded and thrown away. >They claim to be everything Cole could be and wants to be. >They're just shadow the hedgehog essentially, perhaps they could even be Kanako's idealized version of Cole.
ya know i was thinking about just cutting kanako's shaded face sprites, but it would be a perfect gag for a dark world.
not implying something NSFW, but just something embarrassing that kanako's scared of turning into a darkner.
>but just something embarrassing that kanako's scared of turning into a darkner.
Kanako's insanely cringe sonic/sailor moon OC who has all the powers, is stupidly over designed and has a comically edgy backstory?
It could be the secret boss of the chapter
neat design, gives me a few ideas.
might not use this one specifically but its very valuable inspiration for things i wouldnt have come up with otherwise.
5 months ago
Anonymous
You have to make the snake face you somehow before you can spare it. Maybe attacking it breaks the barrel, kinda like attacking Ice Cap in Undertale lets you steal its hat. Otherwise make the ACT some kind of pun about shooting fish in a barrel where you have to shoot fish into the barrel's mouth so it goes to sleep and the head has to turn around.
5 months ago
Anonymous
You have to make the snake face you somehow before you can spare it. Maybe attacking it breaks the barrel, kinda like attacking Ice Cap in Undertale lets you steal its hat. Otherwise make the ACT some kind of pun about shooting fish in a barrel where you have to shoot fish into the barrel's mouth so it goes to sleep and the head has to turn around.
wait, I read that as "give me a few ideas"
oh well
5 months ago
Anonymous
well, now i know how to implement that one.
so thanks.
sometimes misreading helps out.
5 months ago
Anonymous
Glad you like it. Do you need anything else sprited or just more darkners?
5 months ago
Anonymous
well for the current moment, i dont really want anything else. gotta get a demo set up. which first i need to organize various sprites.
Recap of some ideas we have had about Deltarune Yellow kanako in these threads? >Kanako and Clover are childhood friends >She is into baseball wich explains the kanabo she uses in the darkworlds >She is either unaware of Chujin's racism or feels very uncomfortable about it >She is either a weirdo in school or the popular girl who is also secretly very manipulative >Used to eat lego bricks as a toddler or still eats them >Is into art and has some success on the internet as an artist
Legit working on a full game hard mode and rewrite, focusing on improving the games comedy and pacing as well as modified enemy attacks. I am still getting familiar with UndertaleModTool so I don’t know how long it’ll take but I’ll see about releasing it as a mod similar to Bits and Pieces. I’ll write down feature requests in a notebook, keep them simple, for now.
Make Starlo's quickdraw in genocide actually kill you, and make his dialogue change depending on whether you waited for him to turn around or not before shooting.
Probably not "simple", though.
are there any anons who've used an ut game engine here right now?
I've still been thinking about writing out a fanfic for this game (frighteningly leaning towards committing now; god help me), and I've got two ways to do it
the easiest and most accessible way is just writing it out on simple text and then uploading it somewhere
a more immersive but ambitious way, of which is attracting me, is to use a game engine like godot or gamemaker to create a visual novel of sorts by using just the text box and a background, that way I can use the text box portraits, their gibberish, and all those fancy text effects for maximum impact
I've got baby programming experience (solved some introductory problem sets and stuff). how hard would it be to wrangle the already existing UTY and mod it into just being my glorified vn, or making my own from scratch? willing to learn because it sounds fun too, and I'm not scared by computer stuff, I've troubleshooted them (by googling and using intuition lol)
also for anyone that wants to answer, does listening to ut textbox sounds for hours sound tolerable? I mean, sure, it sounds cool on paper, but there's a difference between interacting through a game's world using a text box, and having the entire world be reduced to a text box and a background. if you had to chose between just reading it or "playing" it through a textbox, which would you choose?
>haven't even wrote anything out yet, just a bunch of draft notes
it's so over, it never even began...
the game novel idea is kind of cool, but to be completely straight with you, that sounds like way too much work for the payoff
i'd just make the text first and upload it on ao3 or whatever. anyone willing to read a fanfic of a fangame is probably not gonna care if it's just regular text or a visual thing. and you can always just change your mind later and implement the complete writing over to game form, but even then, just making that into a video would probably be more effective and convenient (viewers don't have to download a file to read it, they could just see it on youtube)
>a video would probably be more effective and convenient
I was thinking of that too. if I make a game/mod, people would have to download it, and then there's bug issues and all that, might not work for some. you never know, it might require more work afterwards compared to just making and editing a video
if I do end up deciding to vn it, this what I'll do
thanks for the sobering perspective anon
>Traveler has a good zero soul Flowey fight, completely fricks up everything afterwards >UTY has a 1 soul fight that's fricking insane and it's right at the end and arguably one of the most polished and well-designed parts of the game so they can't frick anything up after it
It's like they knew
OK now I've actually finished the last part of Cover Up The Footprints' epilogue. The suggestion I used here was Clover and Kanako visiting Chujin's grave, comparing their situations and their perspectives then and now. I also combined it with the suggestion someone else had of exploring what their soul bond would mean for their life situation, so it ended up a bit more serious than I intended at first, but I still kinda like where it went all in all
Also I want to thank the guy who suggested that the scene would be a good time for Flowey to rock up again, I honestly hadn't thought of that but it's smart shit
Prior parts are here >pt1 - https://pastebin.com/bEWxSspp >pt 2 - https://pastebin.com/gqRzNNX9
Is this the actual last part?
Loved the entire thing but feels kind of a downer note to end on given how feel good it was up to that point
Not to say this part wasn't a great read, just it being a rather sad chapter to end on feels a bit... off
Regardless, you're a legend writer-san, easily the actual canon ending for me
Yeah that's the last of it I feel. I thought about doing a little date night with Starlo/Ceroba or something, but A: I wasn't sure everyone would be into it and B: I wanted to keep focus on Clover, Kanako and Ceroba in particular for the last bit
I didn't really mean for it to come off as being sad in the end, I was trying to aim for cathartic more than anything. I might try and review my word choices before I put it on AO3 and see if I can correct that, I really meant for it to be like a happy ending where Clover's finally internalized the idea that he can give life with them a real shot, Flowey's going to give the family their space, and Clover could possibly even end up being some sort of active participant in UT. Maybe I need to have a bit less morosity toward the end, or extend it a bit and show Clover looking forward to something to convey that kind of tone?
I greatly appreciate that you think of it like that though in any case, means a lot to me
done reading it, great as always. i read the unfinished pt 3 a few days ago, genuinely made me tear up. the ending bit with flowey *slightly* broke the flow, but that's what he does in the game anyways, and it was a very good inclusion, and provided great closure while still keeping flowey as an evil soulless bastard.
ur easily the best creative in these threads dude. one of my long-term goals is to make a good story RPG, and it's hard to know where to start cuz my skills are more at coding and animation rather than writing, but CUTF inspires me massively, probably even more than undertale yellow itself. the level of depth and emotion and humanity you gave these decent-at-best characters, the way you transformed an indecisive and feeble narrative into such a beautiful story about grief and love and legacy and family and compassion, it seriously blows my fricking mind.
i would not have stuck around drawgayging for these threads nearly as long as i did, if not for you. i dream i could write this good, or knew someone who could write this good. GL on whatever you do next man.
i don't have any new art to attach to this so i'll just send this rough
im not complaining about it, i praised it more than anything actually. i just think maybe the previous section could have risen to a little bit more of a high note beforehand (example: they weep their hearts out, and realize their love for one another as a family has permanently set, and ceroba thanks chujin for his advice at his grave, as they all walk back home together with a sorrowful happiness in their hearts) then the lead-in to flowey's part would flow more naturally
Yeah, I see that. I just feel like I should've caught it. Ceroba's breakdown broke me the first time I read it.
They'll probably change it up with your advice to end it on a bit more of a high note.
>Ceroba's breakdown broke me the first time I read it.
same here then again when i first finished the game i kept fantasizing about talking her down and helping her in any way i can and that kept making me tear up too, i just want ceroba to be happy
I dunno if I could call myself the best but I really appreciate the praise. I'm glad to have made people happy with it and I'm glad it made you so inspired, your drawings are great. I've always envied artists for actually being able to draw what's on their mind >i dream i could write this good, or knew someone who could write this good.
It's all practice I honestly think, I'm starting to think lately that what people call talent is just a natural inclination to want to practice something. Mostly what I think helps a lot is remembering to focus on pain and suffering, and I don't mean that in an emo way. Characters contending with and overcoming suffering just feels powerful to me, I always liked when people put that in their stories so I tried to always keep it in mind. >Does this hurt them? Is that necessary right now? If so, how can they get better? >What do they think of this? How does this change their outlook? >Does this mean anything for their future?
Are all questions I ask myself a lot when I'm writing something. That one book "How to Write Damn Good Novel" helped me a lot as well, even if not every lesson perfectly applies to shorter stories >one of my long-term goals is to make a good story RPG, and it's hard to know where to start
Gameplay-wise I'd start with a gimmick and design the core gameplay around it. Story-wise I'd think of a main character and their situation, an ending (emotional and situational) you want them to be guided to, and what kind of pain you want them to go through that helps change them. There was lots of pain that went unused in UTY and felt like it was just begging be converted into catharsis, and that was what I wanted to do
Gimme a holler on AO3 or something if you need anything, and good luck with what you're doing as well
>what people call talent is just a natural inclination to want to practice something
definitely, no one is born good at skills like drawing, music, and i'd assume writing too. it takes love and fascination that's strong enough to make you basically work a part-time job for free for several years, and to overpower your disappointment for how bad you are at it when you start. very much practice. i couldn't have guessed 5 years ago that i'd be doing art, and my art was pretty shit even just 2 years ago.
preciate the advice man, i'll let you know if there's anything big i work on that would be cool to have you on.
God, if I could emotionally connect to the characters. Turns they were right, being emotionally null fricking sucks.
Last time I cried was over spilled milk and as a joke.
I'm probably going tk have to embark on some road of recovery to fix myself.
Anyways, good story. It was highlight of my day each time you would post a new part.
It was pretty nice that some of suggestions managed to affect the overall story. Can't remember which though.
>Word spreads throughout the entire underground of a portal to a literal paradise >Clover frees the entire underground because of Flowey >He lives out the rest of his life with all his friends in paradise while Flowey just seethes in anger
>"After you collect all the glowing rocks, you just pour some water in it and it creates a portal to the aether Clover!" >Flowey's extremely excited to watch Clover and his friends reaction when this entire run was a complete waste of their time and energy. >Chara did the same thing to him way back when. >Martlet frowns down at Clover as they ready their mug of water. >"Clover, you've been working on this for a while- Are you sure it's going to work...? Because if it doesn't, you always have a home with me, okay?" >Clover just nods, then pours the mug of water into the portal. >It works, Flowey stares in disbelief as a portal to green grass, open skies and various floating islands hanging above an infinite sky appear. >Clover smiles, and steps through. Martlet leaps in after them. >"WHAT THE FRICK?!"
>Chara wasn't bullshitting, he just fricked it up
He was trying it on a version of the game hundreds of years old where it hadn't been implemented yet, it works fine in underground21XX version
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Anonymous
Martlet would literally be untouchable in the aether, she'd just fly where-ever the frick she wanted to.
>"Well I'll be a froggit's uncle! >Starlo adjusts his glasses, not believing what he's seeing: a world of floating islands, adorned with colorful moas, golden trees, and clouds as far as the eye can see. >But it's real. >And it's waiting for him to escape their underground prison. >Ceroba just kneels there, all her previous emotions from her battle with Clover cast aside for astonishment and wonder as she eyed the world where the sun never sets. >"I need to go back real quick!" Starlo exclaims, his footsteps fading from Ceroba's ear. >"St... Starlo! Where are you going?!" >"I need to tell my parents!" >He then stopped. >"No! Wait! I need to tell everyone! THE ENTIRE UNDERGROUND!" >Ceroba stood up, and a look of excitement started growing on her face. >"Hold on! I'll help you out, Starlo!" >And she took after him.
>Sure enough, word did spread across the entire underground that salvation lies above, and through a portal of glowing stone and rushing water they all can ascend from darkness. >Everyone and their mother, father, brothers, sisters, children, friends, and family took their belongings and passed through the paradise of the Aether. >A hostile paradise, no doubt, with plenty of its own challenges -- Zephyrs, wieneratrices, Swets, and the rest -- but a paradise through and through. >"Hey, Clover! Dinner's ready!" Martlet called out. >Clover stopped gathering blue berries and made the trek back to their homestead.
>Meanwhile a certain flower could only help but seethe, trying desperately to reload a save file. >Only to be met with *FILE NOT FOUND* everytime.
5 months ago
Anonymous
Thank you anon, this was great. >Flowey being forced to live in the Aether with Clover
Why is this actually a fun premise for a fanfiction?
5 months ago
Anonymous
Flowey being forced to live with a human has always been a fun idea. Just look at the thousand fics that have flowey being frisks potted plant.
Idk about the aether, seems like we're getting a bit desperate for ideas if we're writing greens based of minecraft aether portals lmao
5 months ago
Anonymous
Fricked how all the good ideas are taken >Go to AO3 >Clover gets revived? Too many fics, most popular fic is a revival fic. >Clover doesn't kill himself? How do you compete with Cover up the footprints. >Zenith Martlet absorbs Clover's soul? Currently being updated with great art. >Clover becomes a monster? Literally every variation of this has been written. >Amnesia???? Bird Brain. >CLOVER ENTERS THE FRICKING AETHER?! We just wrote a greentext about it.
Well I'm pretty sure we're out of stuff to write about.
5 months ago
Anonymous
We need more Revival fics where they actually go to the surface, starting like a month or 2 after the actual revival thing, just shity Slice of life shit with various shenanigans. that's why pretty much all the greens I write are set like that
5 months ago
Anonymous
>Clover gets revived
There's a moderate amount of this but not enough GOOD ones.
Falling out of trouble gets me lerolerolerolerobibibibiing.
Also you're boxing yourself in with that mindset. The key to making a good story is to understand that you're pretty much God as a writer and can make any event, no matter how contrived, happen smoothly and engagingly as long as you have the skill for it.
Like, just because there's 1 (one) amnesia fic doesn't mean that you can't include amnesia elements in the story you want to write. You can do things different. Unless you're just reshaping tropes, writing a story involves exploring every avenue of life a character can take, every development and event.
Rather than have him lose his memory at the boat crash, have him lose it another way. His mind snapped after too many resets and Flowey has to guide him through everything AGAIN, or find a new method of doing so. He fell through the steamworks soup and possessed an old AXIS model/random robot, with no memories yet acquiring his new body's programming along with his soul enhancing the weaponry. Genocide Clover loses his memory of the current run after a grueling battle and has to run away from authorities while disbelieving that he'd ever do such a thing. Axis accidentally roughs Clover up too hard when trying to apprehend him and Clover attaches to the robot rather than Ceroba.
You're thinking of premises, not ideas. You can take the premises wildly different places, have them be COMPLETELY different stories and still share them with another story. Hell, you could even copy the story AND premise and just write it better than the current author is. It wouldn't be hard - its fricking Ao3. I'd love to see more revivalfics and martletsorptionfics.
COMBINE premises. Clover gets amnesia after being absorbed into martlet. Clover gets amnesia after getting revived. Clover gets revived but Martlet remembers you're genocides so she mercs him and absorbs him.
5 months ago
Anonymous
There is not a single original idea in existence left, it's all up to how you write it.
5 months ago
Anonymous
The originality is in how you write it. I'm SURE that having (You) be a part of the game as an idea has been around before UT, yet his game's exploration of the topic is the sole one that comes to mind after all of these years. Even his base premise of being meta with mechanics still has a lot of room for originality. There was a post on having the flee option be expanded on and having an impact on decisions and gameplay - that hasn't been done yet.
There's millions of Hero to Villain arcs in writing yet I've never seen one come an inch within how Live a Live did it.
5 months ago
Anonymous
Exactly, instead of doing X caused Y to have Z do Z caused X to do Y
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5 months ago
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Idk I think I meant like
If one story has a character fall and scrape their knee then in another have the characters hurt knee make them fall, sounded better in my head
5 months ago
Anonymous
>Falling out of trouble gets me lerolerolerolerobibibibiing.
I don't get it
>Clover escapes and Flowey can no longer reset him >Also he takes martlet with him
>Word spreads throughout the entire underground of a portal to a literal paradise >Clover frees the entire underground because of Flowey >He lives out the rest of his life with all his friends in paradise while Flowey just seethes in anger
>"After you collect all the glowing rocks, you just pour some water in it and it creates a portal to the aether Clover!" >Flowey's extremely excited to watch Clover and his friends reaction when this entire run was a complete waste of their time and energy. >Chara did the same thing to him way back when. >Martlet frowns down at Clover as they ready their mug of water. >"Clover, you've been working on this for a while- Are you sure it's going to work...? Because if it doesn't, you always have a home with me, okay?" >Clover just nods, then pours the mug of water into the portal. >It works, Flowey stares in disbelief as a portal to green grass, open skies and various floating islands hanging above an infinite sky appear. >Clover smiles, and steps through. Martlet leaps in after them. >"WHAT THE FRICK?!"
>"Well I'll be a froggit's uncle! >Starlo adjusts his glasses, not believing what he's seeing: a world of floating islands, adorned with colorful moas, golden trees, and clouds as far as the eye can see. >But it's real. >And it's waiting for him to escape their underground prison. >Ceroba just kneels there, all her previous emotions from her battle with Clover cast aside for astonishment and wonder as she eyed the world where the sun never sets. >"I need to go back real quick!" Starlo exclaims, his footsteps fading from Ceroba's ear. >"St... Starlo! Where are you going?!" >"I need to tell my parents!" >He then stopped. >"No! Wait! I need to tell everyone! THE ENTIRE UNDERGROUND!" >Ceroba stood up, and a look of excitement started growing on her face. >"Hold on! I'll help you out, Starlo!" >And she took after him.
>Sure enough, word did spread across the entire underground that salvation lies above, and through a portal of glowing stone and rushing water they all can ascend from darkness. >Everyone and their mother, father, brothers, sisters, children, friends, and family took their belongings and passed through the paradise of the Aether. >A hostile paradise, no doubt, with plenty of its own challenges -- Zephyrs, wieneratrices, Swets, and the rest -- but a paradise through and through. >"Hey, Clover! Dinner's ready!" Martlet called out. >Clover stopped gathering blue berries and made the trek back to their homestead.
>Meanwhile a certain flower could only help but seethe, trying desperately to reload a save file. >Only to be met with *FILE NOT FOUND* everytime.
Fricked how all the good ideas are taken >Go to AO3 >Clover gets revived? Too many fics, most popular fic is a revival fic. >Clover doesn't kill himself? How do you compete with Cover up the footprints. >Zenith Martlet absorbs Clover's soul? Currently being updated with great art. >Clover becomes a monster? Literally every variation of this has been written. >Amnesia???? Bird Brain. >CLOVER ENTERS THE FRICKING AETHER?! We just wrote a greentext about it.
Well I'm pretty sure we're out of stuff to write about.
I much prefer to think of it as the opposite and Martlet just tries to ignore it
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Anonymous
>Martlet is Clover's first crush >she's also the girl to whom he dedicates his first fap >time goes by and she still tries to ignore the fact his little Clover likes her >but Clover just can't get over her
Delta kanako this delta kanako that
What is DRY Kanako's actual personality like?
Just making her a weirdo like Kris or Susie would be boring and Cole kinda fits that role already
She enjoys burning ants by putting them under magnifying glasses with heavy sunlight and has a cork-board collection of butterflies, with a single fly as the last addition.
what im thinking of for my take on DRY >smug, but not in a rude way >domineering over most situations >she and cole are best friends >very quickly gets flustered at the idea of her and cole being something more than "best friends" (everybody in the school knows it, she's just adamant that they are best friends despite how most of their free time is spent together) >has low patience for the shenanigans of dark worlds.
any suggestions/criticism?
I like the idea of Kanako being the popular girl of school who is also manipulative around others
She pretty much sees Cole as her one "true" friend and most of the other kids in the school wonder why Kanako spends so much time with the local weirdo
But I'm not sure why this Kanako would care so much about being popular despite not really enjoying the popularity, maybe it has to do with her being bullied or something in the past?
good ideas, those together and ive come up with a pretty solid character arc.
I like the idea of Kanako being the popular girl of school who is also manipulative around others
She pretty much sees Cole as her one "true" friend and most of the other kids in the school wonder why Kanako spends so much time with the local weirdo
But I'm not sure why this Kanako would care so much about being popular despite not really enjoying the popularity, maybe it has to do with her being bullied or something in the past?
>maybe it has to do with her being bullied or something in the past?
There was a DRY with that premise, the integrity girl was a bully. Taking advantage of humans having more physical strength to subdue them.
I liked that line where she explains that she doesn't actually hate monsters, in fact she prefers them kver humans.
Because of easy they are to control.
The story also features howbm Cole meet Kanako, defending her from the bully by literally pistol whipping the humans until she had to see the school nurse.
so what name would little ms. b***h princess have?
gives me an idea for something but im terrible at names.
first thought is >yellow soul uses clovers as its healing item = clover >blue soul did ballet = bella
but i dunno.
>Martlet tries to pick up skateboarding in order to seem cool and hip with her adopted human son. >Despite the fact she's only, like, 21 and the kid is a cowboy obsessed eight year old. >She immediately flops face first onto the ground after failing to do a flip. >Clover watches on in concern as his birb mom tries to hold back tears
>Martlet keeps trying, Clover also kind of gets into it because it's clear she needs the moral support. >Martlet begins to get decent at skateboarding, both she and Clover greatly enjoy it. >It becomes a fun hobby for her, and who says Cowboys can't skateboard? >She fits in decently well at the local skatepark- Well, as well as a blue bird monster can on the surface. >Various people begin taking photos of the cute skater-bird doing tricks Ollies ect >She becomes an overnight sensation, rocketed to stardom simply because she's a somewhat attractive bird who can skateboard. >Invited onto talkshows ect, everyone's extremely suprised to learn she's taking care of a human. >She's used by Frisk as the poster-child for human-monster relationships since she's raising Clover and is also now a celebrity. >She uses her grand fortune to fund Cowboy westerns starring Starlo and Clover.
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Anonymous
>>She uses her grand fortune to fund Cowboy westerns starring Starlo and Clover.
This just made me think >Starlo gets to the surface and discovers cowboys are just history now, haven't been real for like a century
Would the shit break him, or would he dedicate himself to bringing cowboys back
5 months ago
Anonymous
Makes underground westerns which over-dramatize the day to day life in the underground, usually with him as the sheriff. It's all shot in the underground since it's mostly abandoned.
Yellows character designs past the ruins are all great, they found an art style that makes furries appealing instead of horrible. Also, it’s no more furry than Deltarune, Susie outfurries the entire cast of this game.
UT fans are literal teenagers who actively refuse not to take obvious rage bait. Combine with the fact that this is Ganker and you are guaranteed 3 replies minimum just by recycling the same complaints ad nausium.
Word has it that if you eat an entire jar of dry roasted peanuts right as the clock hits midnight on the eve of a full moon and chant "Mooch, Mooch, I crave your cooch", Mooch will appear in your kitchen and steal all your silverware
considering all of his dragon quest hero delusions, its either bravery or BALL GAME
he would be the absolute worst person to fall down the underground considering said schizo delusions by the way
Integrity for me makes more sense for him. >Literally devotes himself to people who frick him over. >Has his friends backs no matter what happens.
that's a good point too, i focused too much on the dq stuff when integrity makes a lot of sense too also thinking if he figures out resets and manages to keep memories from one run to the other he would absolutely go from an accidental genocide run to savior of the underground
How long until he realizes he's slaying sapient beings you think?
either halfway through a genocide/high LV neutral route or he'd reset right after getting to the end and feeling horrible about it
Akiyama = could be Perseverance too
Saejima = Patience i guess
Tanimura = also Justice
Majima = honestly can't think of anything for him Shinada = BALL GAME
Tatsuya = Bravery
>Asgore's face when a bunch of Adult humans speaking a strange language bust down the door to his throne room while For Faith blairs in the background.
5 months ago
Anonymous
for me it's kiryu teaming up with 3 other monsters to form the new yakuza 4™ as they beat asgore and 3 other asspull villains up
5 months ago
Anonymous
This brings up a good question, what language do they speak down there? Imagine if the reason Frisk hardly ever responds is because they just can't understand.
Asgore speaking old English would be funny asf
partially it got the indie horror treatment where the cute cartoon characters in a mature setting got eaten up by all of content farm youtube
but the fact FNF is open-source is why it grew so insanely massive and broad. at this point, FNF is more of a tool/engine for literally every fandom to use for fangames. while this has led to some incredible mods, yes, it's also why the fanbase is so autistic, because it's like a tourist melting pot of sonic fans, pokemon fans, etc. in fact i noticed in the credits that a good FNF composer worked on ts!underswap's music.
a full UTY mod could be pretty cool honestly. i'd imagine it looking like this OFF mod
abandoned, last course, alone, and starman slaughter are all really good tracks
i swear to god there are some hidden gemeralds but FNF fans on the whole have dogshit taste and the lamest shit gets pulled up to the frontlines
Seeing how different people's favorite tracks in that mod are is very interesting. In my case, I love Somari, No Party, unbeatable, golden land and overdue.
But enough about that, let's get back on track, we're talking about UTY!
Martlet or Ceroba?
redid the original DRY anon's cole outlines, and made kanako ones. then slapped them together on the same sheet along with the UI elements he made.
also sorted out the overworld and dark world sprites for kanako...
next up is to sort the battle sprites.
i REALLY dont want to do that. but its gotta happen for the battle system.
once im done sorting all related sprites for cole and kanako i'll pack them up in a zip file.
if the original DRY anon is still here it would be appreciated if you could label what sprites belong to what animations.
Kris isn't red, is he? His blue skin contrasts with his red heart, creating a greater harmony. Piss yellow + oranger piss yellow isn't really that great aesthetically.
Definitely an improvement, not sure if another color would be better. Would be more in line with Kris who, as
Kris isn't red, is he? His blue skin contrasts with his red heart, creating a greater harmony. Piss yellow + oranger piss yellow isn't really that great aesthetically.
said turns blue
5 months ago
Anonymous
id prefer if the colors are still a yellow-ish, cant be on the "cold" side of the color spectrum.
What if Cole was a sort of soft mint green/teal instead of yellow?
hm, maybe. i'll need to think about it.
i'll stick with this one for now though, no need to get caught up on this early on.
Kris isn't red, is he? His blue skin contrasts with his red heart, creating a greater harmony. Piss yellow + oranger piss yellow isn't really that great aesthetically.
Ideally he would be recolored as purple or a faded blue-green, but the yellow skin at the very least needs to be desaturated a bit.
Something like this
5 months ago
Anonymous
Better, but a bit too frosty looking.
How about a minty spearmint green?
5 months ago
Anonymous
For which part? The face?
5 months ago
Anonymous
The gums. Ba dum tshhh But yeah the face.
5 months ago
Anonymous
I actually really like the one on the right.
It's visually pleasant and easy on the eyes, and it's not going overboard on the same color like the rest.
The only nitpick I have with it is that he looks like a simpsons character and the color pallette for the clothes is very close to temmie's
5 months ago
Anonymous
i should mention that i have a plan that requires cole to use warmer feeling colors, so colder ones are off limits.
maybe a reddish color scheme?
im not good enough to do a full recolor myself, but if anyone else wants to take a crack at it here's the current sprite sheet. i'll only need the front facing still sprite recolored and i can do the rest.
but the feather stays the same colors.
5 months ago
Anonymous
Better, but a bit too frosty looking.
How about a minty spearmint green?
Oh uhh...
Color schemes aside,
Tried doing my own take on dark world Cole for the kick of it.
Made his skintone the same weird light sea green as Starlo's bits n bobs, and also because it makes him look like a zombie. I think that'd fit for Cole, he strikes me as the type of kid to think that the only thing cooler than a cowboy would be a zombie cowboy.
's Cole sprite layout should definitely be used, recolored or not. its much better detailed.
5 months ago
Anonymous
>its much better detailed.
need i remind you of the games we are talking about?
im not trashing on his, but it just doesnt fit for a UT/DR fangame.
5 months ago
Anonymous
Sure, fine, but at least add in a bit of facial gradation at the very least.
5 months ago
Anonymous
>but it just doesnt fit for a UT/DR fangame.
Yellow already looks a lot more detailed than Toby's artwork so complaining that a fangame based off of a fangame that ALREADY "spits" on UT/DR's artstyle is a bit pedantic
5 months ago
Anonymous
thats fair, its just i dunno. something about it seems off.
might be the skin thats throwing me off, zombie cole just doesnt really seem right.
Sure, fine, but at least add in a bit of facial gradation at the very least.
i'll think about it. probably just thinking about the answer 'no'
5 months ago
Anonymous
deltarune is more detailed than undertale
undertale yellow is more detailed than undertale
therefore deltarune yellow should be more detailed than deltarune
simple as.
>Flowey getting annoyed how Martlet is always there at the end of each run >Clover reaches the rooftop once more >This time Flowey stabs Clover in the back just so he can savor Martlet's reaction to him bleeding out in her arms >Martlet absorbs the soul >Shit Shit frick >Mashes quickload >Load Failed
Tried doing my own take on dark world Cole for the kick of it.
Made his skintone the same weird light sea green as Starlo's bits n bobs, and also because it makes him look like a zombie. I think that'd fit for Cole, he strikes me as the type of kid to think that the only thing cooler than a cowboy would be a zombie cowboy.
decided to take a crack at recolors myself just to sate my own autism more than anything, courtesy of paint.net's hue slider honestly i did the purple one just for myself since purple's my favorite color but it actually looks kinda good even besides that
oh you already did the basic 4-player ones yourself. knew i was dawdling too much with posting this.
how's this?
as a bonus, i also included his secret dark alt that has infinite super meter that you get if you hold all the face buttons + taunt while selecting him
almost.
overworld cole's skin tone is #FFECAD (hex)
try blending the red skin tone and that together.
5 months ago
Anonymous
a little bit above my pay grade, but i still tried fricking around with it. i just kinda slapped a color overlay of cole's skin tone over top the sprites and messed with the transparency and blending to see how it'd turn out since i'm not exactly a real artist or anything.
first and third rows are full-body, second and fourth are skin only.
5 months ago
Anonymous
eh regardless: put both
how's this?
as a bonus, i also included his secret dark alt that has infinite super meter that you get if you hold all the face buttons + taunt while selecting him
and on one spritesheet and export it as a properly scaled image.
i'll do something from there.
5 months ago
Anonymous
well, not sure if you wanted an actual for-animation spritesheet like
i should mention that i have a plan that requires cole to use warmer feeling colors, so colder ones are off limits.
maybe a reddish color scheme?
im not good enough to do a full recolor myself, but if anyone else wants to take a crack at it here's the current sprite sheet. i'll only need the front facing still sprite recolored and i can do the rest.
but the feather stays the same colors.
but here, i guess.
5 months ago
Anonymous
this is good, i can experiment around with these, find an appealing combo, and then recolor the spritesheet.
5 months ago
Anonymous
this is good, i can experiment around with these, find an appealing combo, and then recolor the spritesheet.
alright welp, i think the color scheme here is solid. just need to figure out which shade of skin to use.
i also made a variant set with a darker hat as well.
personally i think 50%, 66%, and 75% look a little too "normal" for dark worlds
my favorite is B2, but i want to know what everyone else thinks.
ignore A2 being slightly off center, had to fix a last minute mistake.
Allow me to post a probably shitty concept I had >DRY >Cole and Kanako main party >Cole seeks to enact justice and be a cool gunslinging vigilante but everyone just finds him funny or cute and doesn't really take him seriously since he's kind of over-the-top >Kanako is a preppy nice girl but is really just putting on an act since people sort of expect it from the prestigious boss monster family, secretly admires Cole's tenacity but doesn't really interact with him much >During a field trip to an old mine a ways outside of town the two are paired together by the buddy system >After some exploration Kanako gets lost and Cole has to find her deep in the mines, queue darkworld transition >Opening like the start of the dunes with western music and all, enemies based around metals and gemstones >Themed around cowboy shit, Cole finds Kanako trying to fight off some monsters and he chases them off >Cole is dressed like a gunslinger, Kanako dressed like shrine priestess >Kanako has 'magic' but really sucks at it/does no damage, quickly learns that she's much better at swinging her staff around like a bat >Cole deals a lot of damage but lacks good spare options, what he does have only makes enemies stronger by pissing them off etc >Antagonist ala Lancer is a lump of coal spoiled child that brags about his dad owning the whole mine and the darkners are all in debt to him and do whatever he says >As the chapter progresses Cole slowly gets better at talking down darkners and reasoning with them, and Kanako slowly opens up about the weight of expectations on her and grows more confident in her physical abilities >The coal kid slowly comes to respect the two as he gets foiled time and again, until things come to a head where he gets left for dead by his dad and the two save him from certain doom
>Coal kid turns around and informs the two about the prophecy, joins the party as the ralsei equivalent and the three go off to confront the big bad >Dad is an unrepentant butthole, maybe hits too close to home for Cole and through plot device his hostility only makes the big bad stronger >Once beaten the boss can be spared or killed >The two learn a valuable lesson in justice and integrity >Fountain closed, return back to wild east hometown to find another fountain has been opened up >Here we go again ending
Followers are a bit glitchy and jumpy but I'll solve them tomorrow its just some array math, don't worry about it.
Save System first pass is done. Loads/Saves from the current state or file reliably, I believe.
I still need to begin work on the battle system, consumable items and stats/equippable items. Also mail and the follower talk system (though these two I believe won't be so difficult).
thanks!
there are only like 2-3 more rooms left from UTY and UT before all rooms become brand new and original so I'm trying to finish the base game systems before doing the content part, which thankfully I have artists ready and waiting to do so. The game is meant to start right after the Axis fight like a direct retcon so I barely need to remake too much from the base game since you don't get to explore much on that point
this recent surge in high-quality fancontent has filled me with the feeling that i'm wasting my life by simply rotting away and refusing to pursue anything due to fear
how do i learn music
Try and study it, in my town there are some free music teachers. Keep your motivation up, and remember: anyone can play guitar and they won't be a nothing anymore (that's a song)
>how do i learn music
start making music
you'll probably make trash at first
find out why it's trash
make some more music that's a little less trash
repeat until you start making good stuff
>how do i learn music
start making music
you'll probably make trash at first
find out why it's trash
make some more music that's a little less trash
repeat until you start making good stuff
Consider that Pizza Tower's music was a bit of a mess in the early demos, but the developer saw potential in it.
Posted some FL tutorials a while ago + some general advice for approaching self learning
[...]
Just kinda dip your toes into something like an instrument or DAW or whatever and take your time learning different functions I totally didn't frick up linking the post haha
>lets arm the person going on a murderous rampage with a real fricking gun for a duel I'm going to intentionally lose
Its funny that the moron bird is the one that doesn't actually have any full moron moments.
TOTAL CEROBA LOVE
Hug Ceroba. Love Ceroba. Take Ceroba on walks through the park. Tuck Kanako into bed. Take Ceroba out for dinner. Cook Ceroba's favorite meal. Bring Ceroba to the surface. Introduce Ceroba to human food. Jump into Mt. Ebott to save Ceroba. Take Ceroba for a lovely evening drive. Help Ceroba repair her house. Lovingly hold Ceroba's head during a kiss. Help Ceroba evade the IRS. Princess carry Ceroba. Give Ceroba lots of children. Sleep in while cuddling Ceroba. Take out the trash for Ceroba. Wipe Ceroba's tears from her face. Eat Ceroba's practice cooking. Pet Ceroba. Pull Ceroba into bed. Go hiking with Ceroba. Bake birthday cakes with Ceroba. Teach Ceroba new skills. Send Ceroba to Kitsune College. Congratulate Ceroba for having grown many tails. Have a large family with Ceroba. Build new bedrooms for each of your children with Ceroba. Dig your own pool in the backyard with Ceroba. Teach Ceroba how to shoot a gun. Grow old with Ceroba. Build up Ceroba's confidence. Clean Ceroba's shrine maiden outfit.
I imagine the bodies would instantly be sent to be preserved since Asgore seems like he would be WAY too soft hearted to approve the use of a child's dead body for experiments.
What would Yagami do if he fell down the underground (down the Yellow path and during it's events)? It would be the second time he'd be dealing with a secret plot revolving a failed deadly serum made for the supposed greater good that lead to the death of an innocent girl, whose creator died by injecting themselves with it AND it's connected to the color blue!
Imagine if the combined moronation and manipulativeness of Chujin and Ceroba ended up causing an integer overflow and making Kanako be smart and earnest?
Bro personality traits aren't passed down at birth.
At best she would be a brat that thinks her fathers job entitles her to the world and at worse she would be a queen-bee rumor spreader type that's also willing to get violent.
>panel one is her getting it as a gift for her birthday >panel two is her drinking from it in a dark room, "world's best" has been scratched off.
actually typing it out, thats not humorous at all. just sad.
I just woke up with a theory that in original UT underground map is actually circular, dunno if anyone noticed this before, but if you assume that camera is not always points north you get kind of a loop, pic related
thank you for indulging in my schizo ramblings
The game states monsters settled in the Ruins because it was as far away from the barrier as they could possibly get, only feeling brave enough to move to New Home once Chara showed up
its stated several times ingame that its pretty much just a straight line from runes to new home.
but its funny to think about it like this because that makes tori even worse.
her trip to asgore really wont be far at all, she could easily beat any child to the throne room and it wouldnt even be an hour walk.
you can back up a save file in the dunes desert area then kill an enemy there and when you're done with neutral you can use that backup to do pacifist without having to replay the whole first half of the game
did you even play the game? did you miss out on the flowey fight?
5 months ago
Anonymous
No, that's Flawed Pacifist. Neutral is just "kill anyone then continue". You don't get to fight her outside of Genocide (which you know, genocide) and the final boss of Pacifist.
Secondary.
Clover was BETRAYED by his friends and TRAPPED in the HYPERBOLIC SOUL CONTAINER FOR 10 YEARS
Monsterking must pay.... with they're blood.... Juandice genoslide must be commit... Epic Read Dead Styel.... Story of YellowTale..
Anon was RESCUED by his friends and SAVED from the HYPERBOLIC SHITPOST CHAMBER FOREVER!!
Anoo must repen... with his hart... forgaveness must be commit... Epic undertaleyello styel.... Story of Anon....
I love Ceroba so fricking much, I just want to make her the happiest monster in the underground and make her feel loved and give her a numerous family and kiss her and hold hands with her and cuddle with her and do so many nice things for her and protect her and go on fun adventures with her and watch movies with her and help her tuck Kanako and her 5 new siblings in and
>Zero XP neutral route >Clover agrees to go live with Martlet as he always does. >"This is the best choice for the both of us, Clover! Well then room-mate, shall we be off?" >Clover runs up to them, giving them a hug. >They begin walking away, although Martlet can't help but feel a horrible sense of dread. >She looks back down to Clover, who should be walking beside her. >A vine has impaled him. It slips out of him, and he falls over and begins bleeding out in front of her. >"Howdy! Golly Clover, you SURE KNOW HOW TO MAKE THINGS DIFFICULT, don'tchya?!" >Martlet completely ignores Flowey and begins desperately trying to tend to the dying Clover. >"I steer you on the straight and narrow, give you the EASIEST POSSIBLE PATH TO ASGORE! YET EVERY. SINGLE. TIME. YOU AGREE TO LIVE WITH THIS BIRD-BRAINED IDIOT!" >Flowey sighs. Clover continues to bleed out, now being held in a crying Martlet's arms. >"Eh, I usually kill bird-brained there, although I figured why not spice it up a little? Why not let her be the one to weep over you as you slowly bleed out in her arms! Golly, just watching it happen makes me GIDDY Clover!" >Martlet chokes back sobs, as Clover suddenly goes limp in her arms. >"Why...? T-They're just a kid!" >"'Cause it's fun, lady. Eh, you're no fun to play with anyway, Clover's reactions are always more sweet. Did you see that look of hopelessness on his face, absolute defeat plastered across it! It was delicious. This timeline has been a GREAT waste of my time, if you ask me." >Flowey begins cackling, as he readies his vines to impale Martlet. >"Might as well finish the job before- Huh?" >Martlet has grabbed Clover's soul, she's now glaring at Flowey. >"Oh, huh. Well, that's a shame. Guess I'll just..."
LOAD FAILED. >"W-What?" >Flowey at first appears frustrated, as the yellow SOUL within Martlet's grasp glows brighter, and brighter. >"Why isn't this working?!" >LOAD FAILED. >Flowey looks back up at Martlet, she's walking towards him.
1/2
>Martlet remains completely silent, the yellow SOUL seems to be sinking into her wing with each step she takes. >Her feathers grow darker, and her hair's growing longer. >"H-Hey lady, stay back alright?! Or else!" >LOAD FAILED. >LOAD FAILED. >Genuine worry is now evident on Flowey's face, as Martlet gets closer and closer to him. >"S-Stay the frick away from me, you- You FREAK!" >Flowey tries to dive away from her. >FILE 2 LOADED. >Flowey stares up at Martlet, his mouth hanging agape. >"I-" >She stomps on him, Flowey lets out a horrible "OW!" as he deforms from the stomp. >Then she stomps on him again, and again, and again, and again.
LOAD FAILED. >Martlet looks down at the completely unrecognizable pile of plant matter covering her boot, and the surface of the roof.
>Martlet remains completely silent, the yellow SOUL seems to be sinking into her wing with each step she takes. >Her feathers grow darker, and her hair's growing longer. >"H-Hey lady, stay back alright?! Or else!" >LOAD FAILED. >LOAD FAILED. >Genuine worry is now evident on Flowey's face, as Martlet gets closer and closer to him. >"S-Stay the frick away from me, you- You FREAK!" >Flowey tries to dive away from her. >FILE 2 LOADED. >Flowey stares up at Martlet, his mouth hanging agape. >"I-" >She stomps on him, Flowey lets out a horrible "OW!" as he deforms from the stomp. >Then she stomps on him again, and again, and again, and again.
LOAD FAILED. >Martlet looks down at the completely unrecognizable pile of plant matter covering her boot, and the surface of the roof.
>Zenith Martlet vs Meta Flowey
Awesome stuff, anon.
oh you are the writer? i just read the new chapter. Really good stuff.
The only two things I'd like to say is that.
First, be careful with skelebros. They should only be secondary characters at all times.
Two, aren't humans supposed to be marginally stronger than monsters?
Or was it that since they are more capable of creating "intent to kill", so even at equal strength their attacks just hit harder?
I just remember that having a physical gave them a huge advantage against monsters.
Yeah it's mostly intent to kill that lets humans seriously hurt monsters.
At most Papyrus might re-appear a few times again later.
Clover has no intent to kill, and he was already a certified jobber before he was involved in a bird-related incident
Anyway, their overwhelming strength over monsters definitely just hasn't been shafted, it's just that currently they have no reason to want to kill anyone.
>Clover has no intent to kill, and he was already a certified jobber before he was involved in a bird-related incident
yeah, but I think it's slightly like how monster magic affects humans, unintentionally hurtful.
even at the start of the game when you would have no real intent to kill and fight only in self-defense, your are attacks still quite powerful.
The only time an attack really carried no intent to kill is against undyne and that was a conscious effort.
Honestly, sounds like it's the result of a heat-of-the-battle thing.
When the damage you deal is based on your emotions and you are getting beat up, you can't help feeling a little negative.
But that's just my interpretation, it sounded logical so I went with it.
5 months ago
Anonymous
Yeah, this is what I'm going for as well. If you're caught up in a fight and really start feeling anger towards a monster or other negative emotions, you'll hurt them more.
>Martlet remains completely silent, the yellow SOUL seems to be sinking into her wing with each step she takes. >Her feathers grow darker, and her hair's growing longer. >"H-Hey lady, stay back alright?! Or else!" >LOAD FAILED. >LOAD FAILED. >Genuine worry is now evident on Flowey's face, as Martlet gets closer and closer to him. >"S-Stay the frick away from me, you- You FREAK!" >Flowey tries to dive away from her. >FILE 2 LOADED. >Flowey stares up at Martlet, his mouth hanging agape. >"I-" >She stomps on him, Flowey lets out a horrible "OW!" as he deforms from the stomp. >Then she stomps on him again, and again, and again, and again.
LOAD FAILED. >Martlet looks down at the completely unrecognizable pile of plant matter covering her boot, and the surface of the roof.
It's always the feet with this bird.
Kino, though.
>Martlet remains completely silent, the yellow SOUL seems to be sinking into her wing with each step she takes. >Her feathers grow darker, and her hair's growing longer. >"H-Hey lady, stay back alright?! Or else!" >LOAD FAILED. >LOAD FAILED. >Genuine worry is now evident on Flowey's face, as Martlet gets closer and closer to him. >"S-Stay the frick away from me, you- You FREAK!" >Flowey tries to dive away from her. >FILE 2 LOADED. >Flowey stares up at Martlet, his mouth hanging agape. >"I-" >She stomps on him, Flowey lets out a horrible "OW!" as he deforms from the stomp. >Then she stomps on him again, and again, and again, and again.
LOAD FAILED. >Martlet looks down at the completely unrecognizable pile of plant matter covering her boot, and the surface of the roof.
Was this inspired by this post?
>Flowey getting annoyed how Martlet is always there at the end of each run >Clover reaches the rooftop once more >This time Flowey stabs Clover in the back just so he can savor Martlet's reaction to him bleeding out in her arms >Martlet absorbs the soul >Shit Shit frick >Mashes quickload >Load Failed
Curious question, when the cutscene activates and Clover moves into a specific position, are you still moving the actual player character, or a cutscene stand-in sprite while hiding the actual player? And are you interpolating his position through code or something to get him to snap to that point from wherever he triggered the cutscene from?
>And are you interpolating his position through code or something to get him to snap to that point from wherever he triggered the cutscene from?
This one. The movement for cutscenes will be done via code, although said movement is triggered in the timeline. I'm doing it like this because the tweener already takes their current position by default so I don't have to account for their initial position, just set the duration and the transition type
Another reason I'm doing it like this is because the Event Manager can be called during dialogue including triggering animations on characters and the current scene animation player. I made the cutscene in that webm in like 1 minute.
The sprites and animations are all contained in their character nodes, the event manager lets me change their current animation too (for this cutscene I just used a "stop" function I made that sets them to idle, kills their speed and sets their current direction too)
you should try to keep the 4 movement grid that UT/DR usually does, it rarely does diagonal movement during cutscenes
so first make the character move to the right X or Y coordinate while keeping the other as is then move the character in positions that are 90 degrees away from each other
* The animatedSprite2D is just the elevator. I'll be reasonable in animating other objects in the scene in a traditional way
And I forgot to answer, the node I'm using for the player controlled Clover and the Follower Ceroba are the same ones as the ones in the cutscene. They have different states meant for cutscenes or different situations that can be changed by the event and game managers (Making an NPC a follower is as simple as changing their state). Here are some for Clover
you should try to keep the 4 movement grid that UT/DR usually does, it rarely does diagonal movement during cutscenes
so first make the character move to the right X or Y coordinate while keeping the other as is then move the character in positions that are 90 degrees away from each other
I could do that, I never noticed it so I didn't realize it was a thing but I can definitely make a method that works like that
Interesting, thanks. Personally I'm trying to think of a way where I can play out cutscenes entirely through the AnimationPlayer so it's easier to move sprites around in exactly the way I want rather than having to rely on the code.
Maybe I can do a hybrid of it so the code handles initial positioning/getting into place and the AnimationPlayer handles all the complex movements.
>Maybe I can do a hybrid of it so the code handles initial positioning/getting into place and the AnimationPlayer handles all the complex movements.
I think that is the best. I have an autoload called the Event Manager (that I also have to put in on the scene everytime unfortunately) and it has all those methods for me to use to trigger dialogue and move characters, change state and etc. The cutscene I made with Ceroba and Clover leaving the furnace
Followers are a bit glitchy and jumpy but I'll solve them tomorrow its just some array math, don't worry about it.
Save System first pass is done. Loads/Saves from the current state or file reliably, I believe.
I still need to begin work on the battle system, consumable items and stats/equippable items. Also mail and the follower talk system (though these two I believe won't be so difficult).
were done by simply moving their positions in the screen so that's possible too
Where in the scene is your AnimationPlayer located relative to Clover/Ceroba? As in, is it on the same hierarchy level as them?
5 months ago
Anonymous
Yes, it's on the same scene as the level. I unfortunately need an animation player on every scene with animation/cutscenes since that's what the Event Manager calls whenever it needs to trigger an animation. Having an animation player that auto generates on the spot with the necessary animations would be *way* too much work and it barely changes much so it wasn't worth doing some more crazy solution if something this reasonable is better. The event manager looks for the animation player with the group name "Animator" (or whichever one I send via the method) and calls the specified animation. I did it like this because it lets me call those methods during dialogue too
5 months ago
Anonymous
I see. In a few hours I'll begin trying out various things to try and find the most efficient cutscene-making workflow, thanks for the info.
5 months ago
Anonymous
I make good use of groups for my methods, they're very easy to set up, understand, and most relevant entities will be the single entities in that group. If there's a group with multiple entities (like followers) I can also treat it like an array of objects instead
>Tires screech to a stop as a man crashes his car into the side of a building. >He stumbles out, coughing violently as various alarms and sirens blare throughout the city he finds himself in. >Billboards used to advertise now have have "STAY INDOORS! AVOID CONTACT WITH INFECTED INDIVIDUALS!" plastered over them. >He stumbles inside an empty looking building, thankfully nobody else is around. >He breathes heavily, pulling out an infection leaflet from his coat pocket, while nursing his wounds. >"Do not touch any item or object previously belonging to an infected individual. This includes feathers which infected inviduals shed- SHIT!" >The man jolts up away from a few blue feathers that just so happened to be laying next to him. >He backs up, thankful that he just avoided being infected, if he wasn't already... >He bumps into something soft. He slowly turns around, a smiling blue bird stares down at them. >"Heya! Gosh, why's everyone running away from me?" >She reaches out to grab his shoulder with a wing, the man shrieks and sprints away, letting out a blood curdling scream as he discards his now contaminated jacket. >Various confused looking blue bird women begin emerging from buildings around him, some talking with eachother while others begin walking after him, asking him for help. >He can he hear them approaching, as he continues his mad sprint to safety.
What would a TS!Underswap Yellow AU be like? Since it's implied that the Temmies are the seven fallen humans (including Frisk), then that means Clover becomes a soulless evil plushie
Well he would never leave the ruins for one, probably dies in Asgores arms after an accident and then that causes Asgore to flip to not wanting to kill humans.
Honestly? Frick that could work. >Martlet lives in the ruins with Asgore as an inventor, really wants to work up the courage to start sailing but can't. >Clover actually lives with them for a while after she meets them, they become extremely close. >ASGORE finds out and after one thing leads to another, Clover and Martlet run away from him, only for Clover to fall into in the accident he keeps talking about. >Martlet is fricking heartbroken that her adopted son has died and ASGORE becomes totally pro-human. >Martlet possibly cares for Clover-Temmie as well
>Clover Temmie works with the other Temmies, although cares deeply about Martlet. >The other Temmies like to use Martlet as leverage to stop Clover from doing crazy shit. >Chara can encounter Martlet, who talks about their "adopted kid" a lot, although complains about them always being out with their friends. >If Chara kills Martlet, wrath-Clover just instantly appears and kills them without warning.
Would Martlet even be around at the same age as Yellow in TS!USY? Yellow soul swaps with Cyan there, so Clover would be the very first human after Frisk died
Imagine Kanako sitting on your face. Imagine her tail waggling with happines while her butt presses with all her weight on your face. Imagine how soft her fluffy buttcheeks would feel against every inch of your face.
cute BROKEN furry women
the broken part is very important because it leads to drama which ends with sweet comforting and new found love obtained through shared hardships
>the animals are SO FRICKING FUNNY
>"This jeep kicks ass! I can watch the Mettaton Show while driving!"
>"THOSE ROBOTS ARE SO FRICKING FUNNY THEY MAKE ME WANT TO STAB MY DAUGHTER"
um it's a hummer sweaty
Tardfox wouldnt be able to get a drivers license
She wouldn't even realize you need one
She'd be a better driver than most on the road.
>Undertale Yellow threads finally die off
>OP doesn't even include the name in the OP
its because the dumbass OP made it before the other thread even reached bumplimit
>"Hey, Cole... go grab the cheese grater from the kitchen. I want to try something."
i fear what kanako is planning.
So that's why the tanuki family down the street moved away...
why didnt he stop this?
MO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I recommend Yakuza 3.
You like kissing birds don’t you
ITS TIME... FOR MY POUND OF FLESH!
*mating presses Martlet*
>tries to act all smug about it
>her act quickly breaks
>she starts excitedly talking on and on about how happy she is about it
This is a public announcement from the Royal Guards.
Please be on the lookout for Martlet as she is wanted for the crime of child molestation.
Please report any sightings of Martlet to your nearest Royal Guard for her immediate arrest.
>"Oh come on, officer! It's not rape if he didn't say no!"
>"Sure, he may have been tied up and gagged, but I didn't hear him say the word 'no', so it's fine!"
>kanako when there's a dark world in her room and she remembers the NSFW commissions she made
>"..."
>"..."
>"Cole, I-"
>"Don't bother."
>"We'll talk about the fifty half naked cowboy humans once we get out of here."
>"O-okay."
>The whole dark world adventure is laced with the most awkward atmosphere that could possibly exist in reality.
>half naked
>not fully naked
>not fully naked in the showers
>not fully naked in the showers on ram ranch
Cole's meme sensors are going to overload
Oh, the half naked ones are just the first one he saw. It gets progressively worse and more awkward as the two continue in the dark world.
Awkward? Increasingly more horny more like. DRY!Kanako probably drew more than just ram ranch cowboys, she probably drew fox/kitsune chicks too, some of them even resemble Kanako herself. There are even some where they were getting it on with humans too. Cole's gonna have some wild dreams after this adventure.
>"oh god... cole we should find a different path."
>"why?"
>"w-w-well... i uh... i-i took a FEW fetish comissions and uh..."
>kanako looks back down the dark alleyway, a shiver goes down her spine
>"i-i-i REALLY dont want to have that conversation."
>"... it cant be that bad. its just stuff like bondage, right?"
>kanako's heart drops
>"... right?"
>kanako cant come up with the words to explain herself as cole develops a slightly disgusted look
>"... alright, we'll find a way around."
>about two rooms away
>"but its nothing illegal, right?"
>"god no."
>they look around and slowly come to the grim realization that there is no other path
who's the area secret boss
Strangely familiar looking human obsessed fox but REALLY tall
Delta So Sorry
Kanako's highest paying commssioner, his OC has so much disgusting fetish porn every other darkner fears him
>Cole is so fricking disgusted at what he sees that you can't spare this secret boss.
>You have to kill it.
>Kanako doesn't remotely judge and even encourages you to hurt it as much as possible.
>You think she WANTS to draw half of the things she had to for him? No, man, it was only for the money.
>A weight has been cleared from Kanako's mind once all is said and done. She gains an extra HP and DEF boost for the rest of the game.
The most impressive thing someone could do with deltasorry is turn him into an actual character like Toby did with the fedora wearing brony Papyrus prototype
>turn him into an actual character
The source material is so tainted, I don't think you could remotely do that and make it land.
its her own personal fetish work.
She'd definitely have an injection, medical, and experimentation fetish.
I just wonder if clover or her would be the subject of the drawings.
Herself
Bird Clover?
Literally just Kanako's idealized version of Cole as a monster.
Kanako's cringe OC she made when she was like 12 years old
>the two make it through
>"alright. i only have one question."
>"o-oh god..."
>"why the frick was THAT in a much higher quality than everything else IN THE ENTIRE DARK WORLD?"
>"do you have to ask?"
>cole goes quiet
>"well ok, its obvious why."
>"if you tell anyone you're dead. i keep it a secret, so you do the same ok?"
>Cole's face when he sees what Kanako was trying to hide
Hear me out here
>Kanako draws Clover as a bird-monster, what they'd look like if they were Martlet's actual kid.
>Boss of that chapter is that drawing, discarded and thrown away.
>They claim to be everything Cole could be and wants to be.
>They're just shadow the hedgehog essentially, perhaps they could even be Kanako's idealized version of Cole.
ya know i was thinking about just cutting kanako's shaded face sprites, but it would be a perfect gag for a dark world.
not implying something NSFW, but just something embarrassing that kanako's scared of turning into a darkner.
>but just something embarrassing that kanako's scared of turning into a darkner.
Kanako's insanely cringe sonic/sailor moon OC who has all the powers, is stupidly over designed and has a comically edgy backstory?
It could be the secret boss of the chapter
by the way, are you gonna use that rude buster an anon made some time back or do you have something else in mind?
personally i think it sounds fine, so maybe.
i might try creating a few tracks myself, but as ive said before: no artistic talent. so who knows.
Hey anon I made a Darkner for your game
I'm not really the best designer so let me know if it doesn't fit
>forgot to attach picture
neat design, gives me a few ideas.
might not use this one specifically but its very valuable inspiration for things i wouldnt have come up with otherwise.
You have to make the snake face you somehow before you can spare it. Maybe attacking it breaks the barrel, kinda like attacking Ice Cap in Undertale lets you steal its hat. Otherwise make the ACT some kind of pun about shooting fish in a barrel where you have to shoot fish into the barrel's mouth so it goes to sleep and the head has to turn around.
wait, I read that as "give me a few ideas"
oh well
well, now i know how to implement that one.
so thanks.
sometimes misreading helps out.
Glad you like it. Do you need anything else sprited or just more darkners?
well for the current moment, i dont really want anything else. gotta get a demo set up. which first i need to organize various sprites.
That certainly is a snake with a barrel for a head. Does he have a name?
>barrel for a head
look again.
Recap of some ideas we have had about Deltarune Yellow kanako in these threads?
>Kanako and Clover are childhood friends
>She is into baseball wich explains the kanabo she uses in the darkworlds
>She is either unaware of Chujin's racism or feels very uncomfortable about it
>She is either a weirdo in school or the popular girl who is also secretly very manipulative
>Used to eat lego bricks as a toddler or still eats them
>Is into art and has some success on the internet as an artist
>all of the HUMAN'D commission featuring the human she modelled after cole end up in the dark world
What if it just creates a bunch of darkners who really want to frick Cole?
Legit working on a full game hard mode and rewrite, focusing on improving the games comedy and pacing as well as modified enemy attacks. I am still getting familiar with UndertaleModTool so I don’t know how long it’ll take but I’ll see about releasing it as a mod similar to Bits and Pieces. I’ll write down feature requests in a notebook, keep them simple, for now.
Make Starlo's quickdraw in genocide actually kill you, and make his dialogue change depending on whether you waited for him to turn around or not before shooting.
Probably not "simple", though.
That’s doable
I'm honestly surprised no one has ever tried to make a full Undertale Hard Mode mod or fangame
Where should one keep tabs on your progress.
>yellow threads are dying
>didn't start my fancomic yet
It's so over.
Better hurry
are there any anons who've used an ut game engine here right now?
I've still been thinking about writing out a fanfic for this game (frighteningly leaning towards committing now; god help me), and I've got two ways to do it
the easiest and most accessible way is just writing it out on simple text and then uploading it somewhere
a more immersive but ambitious way, of which is attracting me, is to use a game engine like godot or gamemaker to create a visual novel of sorts by using just the text box and a background, that way I can use the text box portraits, their gibberish, and all those fancy text effects for maximum impact
I've got baby programming experience (solved some introductory problem sets and stuff). how hard would it be to wrangle the already existing UTY and mod it into just being my glorified vn, or making my own from scratch? willing to learn because it sounds fun too, and I'm not scared by computer stuff, I've troubleshooted them (by googling and using intuition lol)
also for anyone that wants to answer, does listening to ut textbox sounds for hours sound tolerable? I mean, sure, it sounds cool on paper, but there's a difference between interacting through a game's world using a text box, and having the entire world be reduced to a text box and a background. if you had to chose between just reading it or "playing" it through a textbox, which would you choose?
>haven't even wrote anything out yet, just a bunch of draft notes
it's so over, it never even began...
I'm currently experimenting with Godot to make a basic Undertale skeleton, I cannot promise that it will ever be ready, though.
the game novel idea is kind of cool, but to be completely straight with you, that sounds like way too much work for the payoff
i'd just make the text first and upload it on ao3 or whatever. anyone willing to read a fanfic of a fangame is probably not gonna care if it's just regular text or a visual thing. and you can always just change your mind later and implement the complete writing over to game form, but even then, just making that into a video would probably be more effective and convenient (viewers don't have to download a file to read it, they could just see it on youtube)
>a video would probably be more effective and convenient
I was thinking of that too. if I make a game/mod, people would have to download it, and then there's bug issues and all that, might not work for some. you never know, it might require more work afterwards compared to just making and editing a video
if I do end up deciding to vn it, this what I'll do
thanks for the sobering perspective anon
They forgot the snakeskin pattern on the shoes.
Draw my wife! Sprite sheet: https://files.catbox.moe/cggeel.png
>Traveler has a good zero soul Flowey fight, completely fricks up everything afterwards
>UTY has a 1 soul fight that's fricking insane and it's right at the end and arguably one of the most polished and well-designed parts of the game so they can't frick anything up after it
It's like they knew
Why does everyone here write Kanako's character as being Cole's designated cumsock?
Because they want a designated cumsock
It's just funny self-indulgence, you need the intuition to be able to implicitly separate that from the actual "this should be implemented" ideas.
You're right, Cole should be Kanako's designated cumsock instead.
You're right, she should be a lesbian instead.
It's not anything serious anon but it fricking should be because the world needs more /hmofa/
It's called young love
the way ive always seen it is that the two are completely obsessed for eachother.
Because Clover/Cole deserves nice things
https://pastebin.com/qFw2pM3w
OK now I've actually finished the last part of Cover Up The Footprints' epilogue. The suggestion I used here was Clover and Kanako visiting Chujin's grave, comparing their situations and their perspectives then and now. I also combined it with the suggestion someone else had of exploring what their soul bond would mean for their life situation, so it ended up a bit more serious than I intended at first, but I still kinda like where it went all in all
Also I want to thank the guy who suggested that the scene would be a good time for Flowey to rock up again, I honestly hadn't thought of that but it's smart shit
Prior parts are here
>pt1 - https://pastebin.com/bEWxSspp
>pt 2 - https://pastebin.com/gqRzNNX9
legend. just got back from my 6 hour marathon of college classes today so this will be awesome to read as a break right now. you're doing God's work
Is this the actual last part?
Loved the entire thing but feels kind of a downer note to end on given how feel good it was up to that point
Not to say this part wasn't a great read, just it being a rather sad chapter to end on feels a bit... off
Regardless, you're a legend writer-san, easily the actual canon ending for me
Yeah that's the last of it I feel. I thought about doing a little date night with Starlo/Ceroba or something, but A: I wasn't sure everyone would be into it and B: I wanted to keep focus on Clover, Kanako and Ceroba in particular for the last bit
I didn't really mean for it to come off as being sad in the end, I was trying to aim for cathartic more than anything. I might try and review my word choices before I put it on AO3 and see if I can correct that, I really meant for it to be like a happy ending where Clover's finally internalized the idea that he can give life with them a real shot, Flowey's going to give the family their space, and Clover could possibly even end up being some sort of active participant in UT. Maybe I need to have a bit less morosity toward the end, or extend it a bit and show Clover looking forward to something to convey that kind of tone?
I greatly appreciate that you think of it like that though in any case, means a lot to me
>clover + kanako pics are done
>CUtF done
owari da...
DON'T WORRY ANON
50 MORE SEASONS OF KANAKO AND CLOVER ADVENTURES
COMING TO A THREAD NEAR (YOU)
I really hope not.
I really hope so.
KANAKO AND CLOVER A HUNDRED... MILLION YEARS KANAKO AND CLOVER!
thank you for all of the good reads, this is the canon ending for yellow in my eyes
done reading it, great as always. i read the unfinished pt 3 a few days ago, genuinely made me tear up. the ending bit with flowey *slightly* broke the flow, but that's what he does in the game anyways, and it was a very good inclusion, and provided great closure while still keeping flowey as an evil soulless bastard.
ur easily the best creative in these threads dude. one of my long-term goals is to make a good story RPG, and it's hard to know where to start cuz my skills are more at coding and animation rather than writing, but CUTF inspires me massively, probably even more than undertale yellow itself. the level of depth and emotion and humanity you gave these decent-at-best characters, the way you transformed an indecisive and feeble narrative into such a beautiful story about grief and love and legacy and family and compassion, it seriously blows my fricking mind.
i would not have stuck around drawgayging for these threads nearly as long as i did, if not for you. i dream i could write this good, or knew someone who could write this good. GL on whatever you do next man.
i don't have any new art to attach to this so i'll just send this rough
>I was the beta reader
"Anon should I remove the Flowey bit?"
"Nah it fits really well!"
>Everyone complains about the ending.
im not complaining about it, i praised it more than anything actually. i just think maybe the previous section could have risen to a little bit more of a high note beforehand (example: they weep their hearts out, and realize their love for one another as a family has permanently set, and ceroba thanks chujin for his advice at his grave, as they all walk back home together with a sorrowful happiness in their hearts) then the lead-in to flowey's part would flow more naturally
Yeah, I see that. I just feel like I should've caught it. Ceroba's breakdown broke me the first time I read it.
They'll probably change it up with your advice to end it on a bit more of a high note.
>Ceroba's breakdown broke me the first time I read it.
same here
then again when i first finished the game i kept fantasizing about talking her down and helping her in any way i can and that kept making me tear up too, i just want ceroba to be happy
I dunno if I could call myself the best but I really appreciate the praise. I'm glad to have made people happy with it and I'm glad it made you so inspired, your drawings are great. I've always envied artists for actually being able to draw what's on their mind
>i dream i could write this good, or knew someone who could write this good.
It's all practice I honestly think, I'm starting to think lately that what people call talent is just a natural inclination to want to practice something. Mostly what I think helps a lot is remembering to focus on pain and suffering, and I don't mean that in an emo way. Characters contending with and overcoming suffering just feels powerful to me, I always liked when people put that in their stories so I tried to always keep it in mind.
>Does this hurt them? Is that necessary right now? If so, how can they get better?
>What do they think of this? How does this change their outlook?
>Does this mean anything for their future?
Are all questions I ask myself a lot when I'm writing something. That one book "How to Write Damn Good Novel" helped me a lot as well, even if not every lesson perfectly applies to shorter stories
>one of my long-term goals is to make a good story RPG, and it's hard to know where to start
Gameplay-wise I'd start with a gimmick and design the core gameplay around it. Story-wise I'd think of a main character and their situation, an ending (emotional and situational) you want them to be guided to, and what kind of pain you want them to go through that helps change them. There was lots of pain that went unused in UTY and felt like it was just begging be converted into catharsis, and that was what I wanted to do
Gimme a holler on AO3 or something if you need anything, and good luck with what you're doing as well
>what people call talent is just a natural inclination to want to practice something
definitely, no one is born good at skills like drawing, music, and i'd assume writing too. it takes love and fascination that's strong enough to make you basically work a part-time job for free for several years, and to overpower your disappointment for how bad you are at it when you start. very much practice. i couldn't have guessed 5 years ago that i'd be doing art, and my art was pretty shit even just 2 years ago.
preciate the advice man, i'll let you know if there's anything big i work on that would be cool to have you on.
Is there a full version of that rough or is the one with the chart the closest there is?
and here's an isolated cleaned up version of anon thinking about it
Thanks mate.
Is there a version with the exploitable bubble?
beautiful stuff anon, just beautiful.
God, if I could emotionally connect to the characters. Turns they were right, being emotionally null fricking sucks.
Last time I cried was over spilled milk and as a joke.
I'm probably going tk have to embark on some road of recovery to fix myself.
Anyways, good story. It was highlight of my day each time you would post a new part.
It was pretty nice that some of suggestions managed to affect the overall story. Can't remember which though.
Hey I drew shit like this a while ago. Good to see these threads are still kicking. Give requests
Martlet staring at us with the most disgusted look a bird could possibly give
Martlet and Ceroba having a catfight
Kanako trying to eat a lego brick but realizing that Ceroba replaced all her bricks with bigger ones that dont fit in her mouth
Kanako at bat in softball
This but Kanako and Clover/Cole
seconding
This except its Martlet and Clover is the one rubbing himself all over her.
I think this would be more appropriate
You're right, this one probably would work even better
Noelle being cyberbuillied in the undernet by Kanako
Clover breaks his wrists shooting THE HAND CANNON
THE BIG [[Iron on his hip]]
Thirding
fourthing.
Pacifist Clover learning how to get consistent bullseyes with the Wild Revolver by shooting at Ceroba's shield for 0 damage.
Micro bikini Mooch, but she still has her scarf and hat on.
>Flowey tells Clover the only way for them to escape without him becoming an hero is to build an Aether portal.
>But it actually works.
>Clover escapes and Flowey can no longer reset him
>Also he takes martlet with him
>Word spreads throughout the entire underground of a portal to a literal paradise
>Clover frees the entire underground because of Flowey
>He lives out the rest of his life with all his friends in paradise while Flowey just seethes in anger
>"After you collect all the glowing rocks, you just pour some water in it and it creates a portal to the aether Clover!"
>Flowey's extremely excited to watch Clover and his friends reaction when this entire run was a complete waste of their time and energy.
>Chara did the same thing to him way back when.
>Martlet frowns down at Clover as they ready their mug of water.
>"Clover, you've been working on this for a while- Are you sure it's going to work...? Because if it doesn't, you always have a home with me, okay?"
>Clover just nods, then pours the mug of water into the portal.
>It works, Flowey stares in disbelief as a portal to green grass, open skies and various floating islands hanging above an infinite sky appear.
>Clover smiles, and steps through. Martlet leaps in after them.
>"WHAT THE FRICK?!"
Based Clover, too bad the Aether can be really deadly.
The monsters can probably survive.
>Chara wasn't bullshitting, he just fricked it up
>Chara wasn't bullshitting, he just fricked it up
He was trying it on a version of the game hundreds of years old where it hadn't been implemented yet, it works fine in underground21XX version
Martlet would literally be untouchable in the aether, she'd just fly where-ever the frick she wanted to.
>"Well I'll be a froggit's uncle!
>Starlo adjusts his glasses, not believing what he's seeing: a world of floating islands, adorned with colorful moas, golden trees, and clouds as far as the eye can see.
>But it's real.
>And it's waiting for him to escape their underground prison.
>Ceroba just kneels there, all her previous emotions from her battle with Clover cast aside for astonishment and wonder as she eyed the world where the sun never sets.
>"I need to go back real quick!" Starlo exclaims, his footsteps fading from Ceroba's ear.
>"St... Starlo! Where are you going?!"
>"I need to tell my parents!"
>He then stopped.
>"No! Wait! I need to tell everyone! THE ENTIRE UNDERGROUND!"
>Ceroba stood up, and a look of excitement started growing on her face.
>"Hold on! I'll help you out, Starlo!"
>And she took after him.
>Sure enough, word did spread across the entire underground that salvation lies above, and through a portal of glowing stone and rushing water they all can ascend from darkness.
>Everyone and their mother, father, brothers, sisters, children, friends, and family took their belongings and passed through the paradise of the Aether.
>A hostile paradise, no doubt, with plenty of its own challenges -- Zephyrs, wieneratrices, Swets, and the rest -- but a paradise through and through.
>"Hey, Clover! Dinner's ready!" Martlet called out.
>Clover stopped gathering blue berries and made the trek back to their homestead.
>Meanwhile a certain flower could only help but seethe, trying desperately to reload a save file.
>Only to be met with *FILE NOT FOUND* everytime.
Thank you anon, this was great.
>Flowey being forced to live in the Aether with Clover
Why is this actually a fun premise for a fanfiction?
Flowey being forced to live with a human has always been a fun idea. Just look at the thousand fics that have flowey being frisks potted plant.
Idk about the aether, seems like we're getting a bit desperate for ideas if we're writing greens based of minecraft aether portals lmao
Fricked how all the good ideas are taken
>Go to AO3
>Clover gets revived? Too many fics, most popular fic is a revival fic.
>Clover doesn't kill himself? How do you compete with Cover up the footprints.
>Zenith Martlet absorbs Clover's soul? Currently being updated with great art.
>Clover becomes a monster? Literally every variation of this has been written.
>Amnesia???? Bird Brain.
>CLOVER ENTERS THE FRICKING AETHER?! We just wrote a greentext about it.
Well I'm pretty sure we're out of stuff to write about.
We need more Revival fics where they actually go to the surface, starting like a month or 2 after the actual revival thing, just shity Slice of life shit with various shenanigans. that's why pretty much all the greens I write are set like that
>Clover gets revived
There's a moderate amount of this but not enough GOOD ones.
Falling out of trouble gets me lerolerolerolerobibibibiing.
Also you're boxing yourself in with that mindset. The key to making a good story is to understand that you're pretty much God as a writer and can make any event, no matter how contrived, happen smoothly and engagingly as long as you have the skill for it.
Like, just because there's 1 (one) amnesia fic doesn't mean that you can't include amnesia elements in the story you want to write. You can do things different. Unless you're just reshaping tropes, writing a story involves exploring every avenue of life a character can take, every development and event.
Rather than have him lose his memory at the boat crash, have him lose it another way. His mind snapped after too many resets and Flowey has to guide him through everything AGAIN, or find a new method of doing so. He fell through the steamworks soup and possessed an old AXIS model/random robot, with no memories yet acquiring his new body's programming along with his soul enhancing the weaponry. Genocide Clover loses his memory of the current run after a grueling battle and has to run away from authorities while disbelieving that he'd ever do such a thing. Axis accidentally roughs Clover up too hard when trying to apprehend him and Clover attaches to the robot rather than Ceroba.
You're thinking of premises, not ideas. You can take the premises wildly different places, have them be COMPLETELY different stories and still share them with another story. Hell, you could even copy the story AND premise and just write it better than the current author is. It wouldn't be hard - its fricking Ao3. I'd love to see more revivalfics and martletsorptionfics.
COMBINE premises. Clover gets amnesia after being absorbed into martlet. Clover gets amnesia after getting revived. Clover gets revived but Martlet remembers you're genocides so she mercs him and absorbs him.
There is not a single original idea in existence left, it's all up to how you write it.
The originality is in how you write it. I'm SURE that having (You) be a part of the game as an idea has been around before UT, yet his game's exploration of the topic is the sole one that comes to mind after all of these years. Even his base premise of being meta with mechanics still has a lot of room for originality. There was a post on having the flee option be expanded on and having an impact on decisions and gameplay - that hasn't been done yet.
There's millions of Hero to Villain arcs in writing yet I've never seen one come an inch within how Live a Live did it.
Exactly, instead of doing X caused Y to have Z do Z caused X to do Y
Idk I think I meant like
If one story has a character fall and scrape their knee then in another have the characters hurt knee make them fall, sounded better in my head
>Falling out of trouble gets me lerolerolerolerobibibibiing.
I don't get it
Real
playing Minecraft with Martlet and Kanako...
its funny you mention this because i had a dream exactly like that but it was just kanako.
>"You're playing Minecraft in a cave looking for diamonds. That's funny, cause I'm in the same cave looking for minors."
How would Clover react after discovering how much Martlet wants to frick him?
If I were Clover I'd be happy
I much prefer to think of it as the opposite and Martlet just tries to ignore it
>Martlet is Clover's first crush
>she's also the girl to whom he dedicates his first fap
>time goes by and she still tries to ignore the fact his little Clover likes her
>but Clover just can't get over her
Me and my beautiful, kind, gentle, genius wife Ceroba.
>kind, gentle
not ceroba for sure
You shut your fricking mouth.
O B L I T E R A T I O N
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Does anything change if you reset after the true pacifist ending and do another true pacifist playthrough?
Not as far as I know
The only real changes after reseting are some of Flowey's dialogues in the neutral ending
Delta kanako this delta kanako that
What is DRY Kanako's actual personality like?
Just making her a weirdo like Kris or Susie would be boring and Cole kinda fits that role already
She enjoys burning ants by putting them under magnifying glasses with heavy sunlight and has a cork-board collection of butterflies, with a single fly as the last addition.
what im thinking of for my take on DRY
>smug, but not in a rude way
>domineering over most situations
>she and cole are best friends
>very quickly gets flustered at the idea of her and cole being something more than "best friends" (everybody in the school knows it, she's just adamant that they are best friends despite how most of their free time is spent together)
>has low patience for the shenanigans of dark worlds.
any suggestions/criticism?
>Enjoys being the one in control
>Manipulates other people for Cole's sake, although she's completely honest with her close friends.
good ideas, those together and ive come up with a pretty solid character arc.
I like the idea of Kanako being the popular girl of school who is also manipulative around others
She pretty much sees Cole as her one "true" friend and most of the other kids in the school wonder why Kanako spends so much time with the local weirdo
But I'm not sure why this Kanako would care so much about being popular despite not really enjoying the popularity, maybe it has to do with her being bullied or something in the past?
>maybe it has to do with her being bullied or something in the past?
There was a DRY with that premise, the integrity girl was a bully. Taking advantage of humans having more physical strength to subdue them.
I liked that line where she explains that she doesn't actually hate monsters, in fact she prefers them kver humans.
Because of easy they are to control.
The story also features howbm Cole meet Kanako, defending her from the bully by literally pistol whipping the humans until she had to see the school nurse.
Also
>Racist Chujin
thanks
so what name would little ms. b***h princess have?
gives me an idea for something but im terrible at names.
first thought is
>yellow soul uses clovers as its healing item = clover
>blue soul did ballet = bella
but i dunno.
Melody or quaver since the blue soul heals you using musical notes
note like a musical note
melody is good, thanks anon.
>"you sure it's all right down here, clover?"
>bird butt
coziest and warmest place in Snowdin...
Idk if bird brained Anon is here but if so good stuff with the new chapter.
my big brain is so full of fangame ideas but i have zero artistic skill and gamemaker studio is like trying to read the necronomicon
it's so kanaklover....
>i have zero artistic skill
then go get some!
Gah, she’s so beautiful bros
>Martlet tries to pick up skateboarding in order to seem cool and hip with her adopted human son.
>Despite the fact she's only, like, 21 and the kid is a cowboy obsessed eight year old.
>She immediately flops face first onto the ground after failing to do a flip.
>Clover watches on in concern as his birb mom tries to hold back tears
>Martlet keeps trying, Clover also kind of gets into it because it's clear she needs the moral support.
>Martlet begins to get decent at skateboarding, both she and Clover greatly enjoy it.
>It becomes a fun hobby for her, and who says Cowboys can't skateboard?
>She fits in decently well at the local skatepark- Well, as well as a blue bird monster can on the surface.
>Various people begin taking photos of the cute skater-bird doing tricks Ollies ect
>She becomes an overnight sensation, rocketed to stardom simply because she's a somewhat attractive bird who can skateboard.
>Invited onto talkshows ect, everyone's extremely suprised to learn she's taking care of a human.
>She's used by Frisk as the poster-child for human-monster relationships since she's raising Clover and is also now a celebrity.
>She uses her grand fortune to fund Cowboy westerns starring Starlo and Clover.
>>She uses her grand fortune to fund Cowboy westerns starring Starlo and Clover.
This just made me think
>Starlo gets to the surface and discovers cowboys are just history now, haven't been real for like a century
Would the shit break him, or would he dedicate himself to bringing cowboys back
Makes underground westerns which over-dramatize the day to day life in the underground, usually with him as the sheriff. It's all shot in the underground since it's mostly abandoned.
>like undertale
>prefer the silly, unique and weird monster designs to the furshit
>look at fangame
>it's furry
tsunderswap is probably more your style then
the silly, unique and weird monster designs to the furshit
I do too but that's not a good reason to immediately give up on it before trying it
I really don't understand this complaint. The Ketsunakes are about as important as the Dreemurrs and there's an equal amount of them
Yellows character designs past the ruins are all great, they found an art style that makes furries appealing instead of horrible. Also, it’s no more furry than Deltarune, Susie outfurries the entire cast of this game.
how do people still keep falling for this bait
farming the same "so true! goat skeletons oversaturated!" responses for like the fifth time
I mean, the grievances with skeletons and goats are valid.
UT fans are literal teenagers who actively refuse not to take obvious rage bait. Combine with the fact that this is Ganker and you are guaranteed 3 replies minimum just by recycling the same complaints ad nausium.
Pretty harsh, Catposter.
>like undertale
>prefer silly, unique and weird monster designs to the furshit
>look at the dreemurs
>they're furry
Yellow would've been better if the Ketsukanes + Martlet werre skeletons or goats or goat skeletons
Wait for Deltarune then you’ll get your goat skeleton (gaster)
So true! If it isn't an epic quirky skeleton with an edgy backstory it isn't Undertale™
'roba on the 'log
What happened to all the Moochposters? Where is the squnny?
Mostly lurking until the secret codephrase is mentioned
>Afflicted with the precusor to Mart-Rot, Mooch-Rot. A weaker, earlier variation of the sickness.
Jokes on you, I've got BOTH.
Strong, weak, it's a MOOCH point anyways.
i think you’re NUTS
We're always watching.
Pressing my face between Mooch's plump, hotdog bun shaped vulva
Toby should make Mooch canon but only mooch
Word has it that if you eat an entire jar of dry roasted peanuts right as the clock hits midnight on the eve of a full moon and chant "Mooch, Mooch, I crave your cooch", Mooch will appear in your kitchen and steal all your silverware
here's a fanfic idea for you
funny yakuzer man falls down the two holes around the same time as clover, shenanigans ensure
Playing the new Yakuza right now actually. What kind of SOUL do you think Ichiban has?
Bravery or possibly Integrity
considering all of his dragon quest hero delusions, its either bravery or BALL GAME
he would be the absolute worst person to fall down the underground considering said schizo delusions by the way
Integrity for me makes more sense for him.
>Literally devotes himself to people who frick him over.
>Has his friends backs no matter what happens.
How long until he realizes he's slaying sapient beings you think?
that's a good point too, i focused too much on the dq stuff when integrity makes a lot of sense too
also thinking if he figures out resets and manages to keep memories from one run to the other he would absolutely go from an accidental genocide run to savior of the underground
either halfway through a genocide/high LV neutral route or he'd reset right after getting to the end and feeling horrible about it
Kiryu=Determination probably
Ichiban=Integrity
Yagami=Judgement obviously
Akiyama=Kindness?
Who else?
Akiyama = could be Perseverance too
Saejima = Patience i guess
Tanimura = also Justice
Majima = honestly can't think of anything for him
Shinada = BALL GAME
Tatsuya = Bravery
>Asgore's face when a bunch of Adult humans speaking a strange language bust down the door to his throne room while For Faith blairs in the background.
for me it's kiryu teaming up with 3 other monsters to form the new yakuza 4™ as they beat asgore and 3 other asspull villains up
This brings up a good question, what language do they speak down there? Imagine if the reason Frisk hardly ever responds is because they just can't understand.
Asgore speaking old English would be funny asf
magic working as an universal translator
That's very boring thoughever
I was scared, I thought the threads were dying but it seems this is the one.
Use the name of the game next time, dumb op
jannies seem like they don't like peak anymore
Jannies scrub them when the name is in the title, gotta make way for more PALPEAK threads y'know?
>yellow palls
Friday night funkin VS STARLO
WOAH
It's very strange to me how fnf became such an autism magnet.
partially it got the indie horror treatment where the cute cartoon characters in a mature setting got eaten up by all of content farm youtube
but the fact FNF is open-source is why it grew so insanely massive and broad. at this point, FNF is more of a tool/engine for literally every fandom to use for fangames. while this has led to some incredible mods, yes, it's also why the fanbase is so autistic, because it's like a tourist melting pot of sonic fans, pokemon fans, etc. in fact i noticed in the credits that a good FNF composer worked on ts!underswap's music.
a full UTY mod could be pretty cool honestly. i'd imagine it looking like this OFF mod
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Mario Madness v2 is the only mod I actually like and I listen to its soundtrack from time to time. It's pretty good.
abandoned, last course, alone, and starman slaughter are all really good tracks
i swear to god there are some hidden gemeralds but FNF fans on the whole have dogshit taste and the lamest shit gets pulled up to the frontlines
Seeing how different people's favorite tracks in that mod are is very interesting. In my case, I love Somari, No Party, unbeatable, golden land and overdue.
But enough about that, let's get back on track, we're talking about UTY!
Martlet or Ceroba?
So what's the current consensus on the whole Moray situation?
Asking for a friend.
Moray is taller than Starlo, imagine this fish teasing that star
thussy
schrodinger's genitals, unknown until you pull down the pants
redid the original DRY anon's cole outlines, and made kanako ones. then slapped them together on the same sheet along with the UI elements he made.
also sorted out the overworld and dark world sprites for kanako...
next up is to sort the battle sprites.
i REALLY dont want to do that. but its gotta happen for the battle system.
once im done sorting all related sprites for cole and kanako i'll pack them up in a zip file.
if the original DRY anon is still here it would be appreciated if you could label what sprites belong to what animations.
and here's an upscaled version for visibility.
Still think Cole is too yellow.
I think green or another color would suit him better.
noted, i'll see about reducing the piss filter intensity on him but i cant promise anything.
It would feel wrong for it not to be at least mostly yellow
Kris isn't red, is he? His blue skin contrasts with his red heart, creating a greater harmony. Piss yellow + oranger piss yellow isn't really that great aesthetically.
I thought you meant the soul/outline. I do kinda agree he looks aggressively yellow/orange
Ideally he would be recolored as purple or a faded blue-green, but the yellow skin at the very least needs to be desaturated a bit.
cole (forma de 50% piss filter)
think this is good or should i go with a different color entirely?
Definitely an improvement, not sure if another color would be better. Would be more in line with Kris who, as
said turns blue
id prefer if the colors are still a yellow-ish, cant be on the "cold" side of the color spectrum.
hm, maybe. i'll need to think about it.
i'll stick with this one for now though, no need to get caught up on this early on.
You could just make a rainbow of coles and pick out the one that looks best
What if Cole was a sort of soft mint green/teal instead of yellow?
Something like this
Better, but a bit too frosty looking.
How about a minty spearmint green?
For which part? The face?
The gums.
Ba dum tshhh
But yeah the face.
I actually really like the one on the right.
It's visually pleasant and easy on the eyes, and it's not going overboard on the same color like the rest.
The only nitpick I have with it is that he looks like a simpsons character and the color pallette for the clothes is very close to temmie's
i should mention that i have a plan that requires cole to use warmer feeling colors, so colder ones are off limits.
maybe a reddish color scheme?
im not good enough to do a full recolor myself, but if anyone else wants to take a crack at it here's the current sprite sheet. i'll only need the front facing still sprite recolored and i can do the rest.
but the feather stays the same colors.
Oh uhh...
Color schemes aside,
's Cole sprite layout should definitely be used, recolored or not. its much better detailed.
>its much better detailed.
need i remind you of the games we are talking about?
im not trashing on his, but it just doesnt fit for a UT/DR fangame.
Sure, fine, but at least add in a bit of facial gradation at the very least.
>but it just doesnt fit for a UT/DR fangame.
Yellow already looks a lot more detailed than Toby's artwork so complaining that a fangame based off of a fangame that ALREADY "spits" on UT/DR's artstyle is a bit pedantic
thats fair, its just i dunno. something about it seems off.
might be the skin thats throwing me off, zombie cole just doesnt really seem right.
i'll think about it.
probably just thinking about the answer 'no'
deltarune is more detailed than undertale
undertale yellow is more detailed than undertale
therefore deltarune yellow should be more detailed than deltarune
simple as.
quick touchup, the soul wasnt exactly FFFF00 (yellow), so i made an edit to correct that and changed the face sprite.
>Flowey getting annoyed how Martlet is always there at the end of each run
>Clover reaches the rooftop once more
>This time Flowey stabs Clover in the back just so he can savor Martlet's reaction to him bleeding out in her arms
>Martlet absorbs the soul
>Shit Shit frick
>Mashes quickload
>Load Failed
Kino
Ceroba!
He just needs to find a nice human for himself.
Agreed. The oversimplified sad Starlos are still hilarious.
Tried doing my own take on dark world Cole for the kick of it.
Made his skintone the same weird light sea green as Starlo's bits n bobs, and also because it makes him look like a zombie. I think that'd fit for Cole, he strikes me as the type of kid to think that the only thing cooler than a cowboy would be a zombie cowboy.
I think this would require recoloring his poncho and hat. I'd vote to keep forma de 50% piss filter
uhh shnuts
Smash alt costumes
decided to take a crack at recolors myself just to sate my own autism more than anything, courtesy of paint.net's hue slider
honestly i did the purple one just for myself since purple's my favorite color but it actually looks kinda good even besides that
oh you already did the basic 4-player ones yourself. knew i was dawdling too much with posting this.
the red one, can you desaturate it a little bit?
Looking at the recolors, i think i the desaturated yellow is the best
Red and purple look the best as well as menacing, the grey one looks like he's activated Goner mode and is about to Gasterized some fools.
how's this?
as a bonus, i also included his secret dark alt that has infinite super meter that you get if you hold all the face buttons + taunt while selecting him
oh whoops, replied to myself instead of the right guy.
Deltafell Yellow Cole goes hard.
What if instead of the I AM ALL OF ME black + red, we give him that chic black hole black + orange?
almost.
overworld cole's skin tone is #FFECAD (hex)
try blending the red skin tone and that together.
a little bit above my pay grade, but i still tried fricking around with it. i just kinda slapped a color overlay of cole's skin tone over top the sprites and messed with the transparency and blending to see how it'd turn out since i'm not exactly a real artist or anything.
first and third rows are full-body, second and fourth are skin only.
eh regardless: put both
and on one spritesheet and export it as a properly scaled image.
i'll do something from there.
well, not sure if you wanted an actual for-animation spritesheet like
but here, i guess.
this is good, i can experiment around with these, find an appealing combo, and then recolor the spritesheet.
alright welp, i think the color scheme here is solid. just need to figure out which shade of skin to use.
i also made a variant set with a darker hat as well.
personally i think 50%, 66%, and 75% look a little too "normal" for dark worlds
my favorite is B2, but i want to know what everyone else thinks.
ignore A2 being slightly off center, had to fix a last minute mistake.
B2 or B3 for me.
B2
Holy shit it’s Koffin K
Mooch doesn't segs
She FRICKS
Timmy Turner
>Starlo is an average kid
>That no one understands
Allow me to post a probably shitty concept I had
>DRY
>Cole and Kanako main party
>Cole seeks to enact justice and be a cool gunslinging vigilante but everyone just finds him funny or cute and doesn't really take him seriously since he's kind of over-the-top
>Kanako is a preppy nice girl but is really just putting on an act since people sort of expect it from the prestigious boss monster family, secretly admires Cole's tenacity but doesn't really interact with him much
>During a field trip to an old mine a ways outside of town the two are paired together by the buddy system
>After some exploration Kanako gets lost and Cole has to find her deep in the mines, queue darkworld transition
>Opening like the start of the dunes with western music and all, enemies based around metals and gemstones
>Themed around cowboy shit, Cole finds Kanako trying to fight off some monsters and he chases them off
>Cole is dressed like a gunslinger, Kanako dressed like shrine priestess
>Kanako has 'magic' but really sucks at it/does no damage, quickly learns that she's much better at swinging her staff around like a bat
>Cole deals a lot of damage but lacks good spare options, what he does have only makes enemies stronger by pissing them off etc
>Antagonist ala Lancer is a lump of coal spoiled child that brags about his dad owning the whole mine and the darkners are all in debt to him and do whatever he says
>As the chapter progresses Cole slowly gets better at talking down darkners and reasoning with them, and Kanako slowly opens up about the weight of expectations on her and grows more confident in her physical abilities
>The coal kid slowly comes to respect the two as he gets foiled time and again, until things come to a head where he gets left for dead by his dad and the two save him from certain doom
>Coal kid turns around and informs the two about the prophecy, joins the party as the ralsei equivalent and the three go off to confront the big bad
>Dad is an unrepentant butthole, maybe hits too close to home for Cole and through plot device his hostility only makes the big bad stronger
>Once beaten the boss can be spared or killed
>The two learn a valuable lesson in justice and integrity
>Fountain closed, return back to wild east hometown to find another fountain has been opened up
>Here we go again ending
Followers are a bit glitchy and jumpy but I'll solve them tomorrow its just some array math, don't worry about it.
Save System first pass is done. Loads/Saves from the current state or file reliably, I believe.
I still need to begin work on the battle system, consumable items and stats/equippable items. Also mail and the follower talk system (though these two I believe won't be so difficult).
Looks good!
thanks!
there are only like 2-3 more rooms left from UTY and UT before all rooms become brand new and original so I'm trying to finish the base game systems before doing the content part, which thankfully I have artists ready and waiting to do so. The game is meant to start right after the Axis fight like a direct retcon so I barely need to remake too much from the base game since you don't get to explore much on that point
Sans is my placeholder
SANS
STAY OUTSIDE OF MY YELLOW KINO
too bad fricko
sans has now replaced every character in yellow and the final bosses are now just him in funny outfits
nice work
excellent
all the followers really does remind me of mother 3 now lol
it's looking surprisingly accurate to the game though
Oh my god, it's them, the Undertale™ Yellow!
THE UNDERTALE YELLOW
THE UNDERTALE YELLOW IS REAL
Now have them go confront Asgore and win Clover's right to live. Because some things are just worth FIGHTing for.
Fine work so far! Can't believe how far you've got already
this recent surge in high-quality fancontent has filled me with the feeling that i'm wasting my life by simply rotting away and refusing to pursue anything due to fear
how do i learn music
Try and study it, in my town there are some free music teachers. Keep your motivation up, and remember: anyone can play guitar and they won't be a nothing anymore (that's a song)
>how do i learn music
start making music
you'll probably make trash at first
find out why it's trash
make some more music that's a little less trash
repeat until you start making good stuff
Consider that Pizza Tower's music was a bit of a mess in the early demos, but the developer saw potential in it.
Posted some FL tutorials a while ago + some general advice for approaching self learning
Just kinda dip your toes into something like an instrument or DAW or whatever and take your time learning different functions
I totally didn't frick up linking the post haha
AYO DAYM THEY GOT DRIP
>Man... this really was an Undertale Yellow.
>Clover you just pissed on the floor
Ceroba is the big pee pee girl around here tho
Kanako no longer wants to play Chujin's cheap Wii bootlegs
She wants to ramble the world and help folks
>lets arm the person going on a murderous rampage with a real fricking gun for a duel I'm going to intentionally lose
Its funny that the moron bird is the one that doesn't actually have any full moron moments.
What became of Clover's original hat and toy gun?
Only God knows. One can hope someone held onto him so SOMETHING of his doesn't wind up in the trash
Onto them*
Who is this?
Either a generic furry oc from Ganker or /trash/, or a cartoon character.
In either case it's off topic.
So it's just some homosexual trying to get the thread deleted?
most likely. happens around this time every night.
Cute!
and also off topic
Clover's little dick. In my mouth. NOW!
This was typed by blue feathery wings
and she'll get away with it too
alright martlet, thats enough.
Kill Martlet.
Falseflagging, Word was mouth not beak! This is clearly Mooch posting after getting payed (by Ceroba) to make Bestgirl Martlet look bad!
mooch hooch booch looch rooch
Imagine the butt
She's such a cutie, she really deserves more fanart.
>"yo Clover, wanna deepthroat some hotdogs with me and then take a nap together?"
>your girlfriend is just the very best friend you could ever have
That's actually really cute.
I just commissioned more Martlet vs Ceroba boxing with nude alts. I hope these threads are still around by the time it's finished.
TOTAL CEROBA LOVE
Hug Ceroba. Love Ceroba. Take Ceroba on walks through the park. Tuck Kanako into bed. Take Ceroba out for dinner. Cook Ceroba's favorite meal. Bring Ceroba to the surface. Introduce Ceroba to human food. Jump into Mt. Ebott to save Ceroba. Take Ceroba for a lovely evening drive. Help Ceroba repair her house. Lovingly hold Ceroba's head during a kiss. Help Ceroba evade the IRS. Princess carry Ceroba. Give Ceroba lots of children. Sleep in while cuddling Ceroba. Take out the trash for Ceroba. Wipe Ceroba's tears from her face. Eat Ceroba's practice cooking. Pet Ceroba. Pull Ceroba into bed. Go hiking with Ceroba. Bake birthday cakes with Ceroba. Teach Ceroba new skills. Send Ceroba to Kitsune College. Congratulate Ceroba for having grown many tails. Have a large family with Ceroba. Build new bedrooms for each of your children with Ceroba. Dig your own pool in the backyard with Ceroba. Teach Ceroba how to shoot a gun. Grow old with Ceroba. Build up Ceroba's confidence. Clean Ceroba's shrine maiden outfit.
Did Alphys do anything with Clover's body? There was nothing physically wrong with it.
all the bodies were probably preserved.
I imagine the bodies would instantly be sent to be preserved since Asgore seems like he would be WAY too soft hearted to approve the use of a child's dead body for experiments.
If monsters captured an adult human male/female, they could harvest a human soul every 9 months instead of having to wait years for more to fall down.
🙁
>Martlet: does Clover need to be an adult for that?
Ceroba!
Should Clover have yellow eyes or only when he's feeling determined?
Only when he's feeling judgemental.
kris is just a red eyed freak.
clover/cole should only have yellow eyes when faced with a grave injustice.
can't believe Clover will go Kirito mode
Bro's going to have the Judge Eyes
What would Yagami do if he fell down the underground (down the Yellow path and during it's events)?
It would be the second time he'd be dealing with a secret plot revolving a failed deadly serum made for the supposed greater good that lead to the death of an innocent girl, whose creator died by injecting themselves with it AND it's connected to the color blue!
Imagine if the combined moronation and manipulativeness of Chujin and Ceroba ended up causing an integer overflow and making Kanako be smart and earnest?
Bro personality traits aren't passed down at birth.
At best she would be a brat that thinks her fathers job entitles her to the world and at worse she would be a queen-bee rumor spreader type that's also willing to get violent.
I think that my idea is funnier.
Has anyone drawn Ceroba drinking from a "World's Best Mom" mug?
>panel one is her getting it as a gift for her birthday
>panel two is her drinking from it in a dark room, "world's best" has been scratched off.
actually typing it out, thats not humorous at all. just sad.
It's funny in a "Oh God that's sad" way
She probably couldn't bear to look at it and keeps it in a cupboard she never opens
I just woke up with a theory that in original UT underground map is actually circular, dunno if anyone noticed this before, but if you assume that camera is not always points north you get kind of a loop, pic related
thank you for indulging in my schizo ramblings
The game states monsters settled in the Ruins because it was as far away from the barrier as they could possibly get, only feeling brave enough to move to New Home once Chara showed up
its stated several times ingame that its pretty much just a straight line from runes to new home.
but its funny to think about it like this because that makes tori even worse.
her trip to asgore really wont be far at all, she could easily beat any child to the throne room and it wouldnt even be an hour walk.
Been thinking of playing this. What route should I play first?
Neutral
Thanks Anons. Guess I'll go Neutral first, should I just kill one enemy in the ruins and continue the game as normal?
you can back up a save file in the dunes desert area then kill an enemy there and when you're done with neutral you can use that backup to do pacifist without having to replay the whole first half of the game
Thanks Anon
You can go around killing all monsters or at least the minibosses and bosses.
kill ceroba and no one else
the rest are pretty chill people except her dumb ass
he said he's playing neutral you dumb secondary
that's the true neutral route dumbass
did you even play the game?
did you miss out on the flowey fight?
No, that's Flawed Pacifist. Neutral is just "kill anyone then continue". You don't get to fight her outside of Genocide (which you know, genocide) and the final boss of Pacifist.
Secondary.
Genocide obviously
Neutral --> Flawed Pacifist (kill the final boss) --> Genocide. Don't bother with True Pacifist.
Clover was BETRAYED by his friends and TRAPPED in the HYPERBOLIC SOUL CONTAINER FOR 10 YEARS
Monsterking must pay.... with they're blood.... Juandice genoslide must be commit... Epic Read Dead Styel.... Story of YellowTale..
Anon was RESCUED by his friends and SAVED from the HYPERBOLIC SHITPOST CHAMBER FOREVER!!
Anoo must repen... with his hart... forgaveness must be commit... Epic undertaleyello styel.... Story of Anon....
Anyone know if beating up the greasers in TS Underswap ruins true pacifist?
it doesn't though the temmies do call you out for it
Speaking of them, is Norman a gravity falls reference?
I love Ceroba so fricking much, I just want to make her the happiest monster in the underground and make her feel loved and give her a numerous family and kiss her and hold hands with her and cuddle with her and do so many nice things for her and protect her and go on fun adventures with her and watch movies with her and help her tuck Kanako and her 5 new siblings in and
She's so pretty with twintails...
>She's so pretty...
Twintails or no twintails, she's precious.
True.
Martlet's horny Mood scares me
Ceroba my love
That one looks more like Flam
I mean, they're both red heads and have problems with seething.
This will be Ceroba in 2013
This is like two steps away from being poopshitter level of detail.
Cerobagays, would you be willing to hug and be friends with this thing?
Yes.
the thumbnail made me think she was about to burst into tears.
Ceroba pequeña…
who’s been making these, anon? Because I hope it’s for an actual Isaac mod.
Like a Kitsune™ Gaiden : The Fox Who Erased Her Name
Before this thread dies, I will say this.
Axis is the best UTY character. Cerobagays and Shartletbros need not respond
>this is my thought please don't respond Who has a different opinion then me
i Need ceroba with Majima's clothes
Reminder: "Furries" are actually an alien psyop to make humans more comfortable with the way they look
What game
Tale of Down Under: Yellow Version
>Zero XP neutral route
>Clover agrees to go live with Martlet as he always does.
>"This is the best choice for the both of us, Clover! Well then room-mate, shall we be off?"
>Clover runs up to them, giving them a hug.
>They begin walking away, although Martlet can't help but feel a horrible sense of dread.
>She looks back down to Clover, who should be walking beside her.
>A vine has impaled him. It slips out of him, and he falls over and begins bleeding out in front of her.
>"Howdy! Golly Clover, you SURE KNOW HOW TO MAKE THINGS DIFFICULT, don'tchya?!"
>Martlet completely ignores Flowey and begins desperately trying to tend to the dying Clover.
>"I steer you on the straight and narrow, give you the EASIEST POSSIBLE PATH TO ASGORE! YET EVERY. SINGLE. TIME. YOU AGREE TO LIVE WITH THIS BIRD-BRAINED IDIOT!"
>Flowey sighs. Clover continues to bleed out, now being held in a crying Martlet's arms.
>"Eh, I usually kill bird-brained there, although I figured why not spice it up a little? Why not let her be the one to weep over you as you slowly bleed out in her arms! Golly, just watching it happen makes me GIDDY Clover!"
>Martlet chokes back sobs, as Clover suddenly goes limp in her arms.
>"Why...? T-They're just a kid!"
>"'Cause it's fun, lady. Eh, you're no fun to play with anyway, Clover's reactions are always more sweet. Did you see that look of hopelessness on his face, absolute defeat plastered across it! It was delicious. This timeline has been a GREAT waste of my time, if you ask me."
>Flowey begins cackling, as he readies his vines to impale Martlet.
>"Might as well finish the job before- Huh?"
>Martlet has grabbed Clover's soul, she's now glaring at Flowey.
>"Oh, huh. Well, that's a shame. Guess I'll just..."
LOAD FAILED.
>"W-What?"
>Flowey at first appears frustrated, as the yellow SOUL within Martlet's grasp glows brighter, and brighter.
>"Why isn't this working?!"
>LOAD FAILED.
>Flowey looks back up at Martlet, she's walking towards him.
1/2
>Martlet remains completely silent, the yellow SOUL seems to be sinking into her wing with each step she takes.
>Her feathers grow darker, and her hair's growing longer.
>"H-Hey lady, stay back alright?! Or else!"
>LOAD FAILED.
>LOAD FAILED.
>Genuine worry is now evident on Flowey's face, as Martlet gets closer and closer to him.
>"S-Stay the frick away from me, you- You FREAK!"
>Flowey tries to dive away from her.
>FILE 2 LOADED.
>Flowey stares up at Martlet, his mouth hanging agape.
>"I-"
>She stomps on him, Flowey lets out a horrible "OW!" as he deforms from the stomp.
>Then she stomps on him again, and again, and again, and again.
LOAD FAILED.
>Martlet looks down at the completely unrecognizable pile of plant matter covering her boot, and the surface of the roof.
>Zenith Martlet vs Meta Flowey
Awesome stuff, anon.
That's not Meta Flowey, that's just the good ol' ordinary Flowey who got owned.
Thanks, I've wanted to write a
"What if Martlet absorbed Clover's soul?" thing for a while but my ass has been busy with bird-brained.
oh you are the writer? i just read the new chapter. Really good stuff.
The only two things I'd like to say is that.
First, be careful with skelebros. They should only be secondary characters at all times.
Two, aren't humans supposed to be marginally stronger than monsters?
Or was it that since they are more capable of creating "intent to kill", so even at equal strength their attacks just hit harder?
I just remember that having a physical gave them a huge advantage against monsters.
Yeah it's mostly intent to kill that lets humans seriously hurt monsters.
At most Papyrus might re-appear a few times again later.
Clover has no intent to kill, and he was already a certified jobber before he was involved in a bird-related incident
Anyway, their overwhelming strength over monsters definitely just hasn't been shafted, it's just that currently they have no reason to want to kill anyone.
>Clover has no intent to kill, and he was already a certified jobber before he was involved in a bird-related incident
yeah, but I think it's slightly like how monster magic affects humans, unintentionally hurtful.
even at the start of the game when you would have no real intent to kill and fight only in self-defense, your are attacks still quite powerful.
The only time an attack really carried no intent to kill is against undyne and that was a conscious effort.
Honestly, sounds like it's the result of a heat-of-the-battle thing.
When the damage you deal is based on your emotions and you are getting beat up, you can't help feeling a little negative.
But that's just my interpretation, it sounded logical so I went with it.
Yeah, this is what I'm going for as well. If you're caught up in a fight and really start feeling anger towards a monster or other negative emotions, you'll hurt them more.
It's always the feet with this bird.
Kino, though.
Was this inspired by this post?
Should've replied to it, my bad
No worries. I'm just glad my ramblings led to something greater, Bird Brained anon.
>still up
homie...
It has a penis, that makes it janny approved even if there's "disgusting and non-advertiser friendly femoid bits"
Who's this?
Who’s what?
What’s Ceroba’s class setup?
Battle Medic
Woke up in a cold sweat this was the first thing I had to try making
is the character jittering due to the snap to pixels setting?
yeah, I'm trying to find a way to fix that in a way that doesn't break sprites as disabling it does some weird shit
all of this is unpolished I'm still gonna fix a lot of stuff
Curious question, when the cutscene activates and Clover moves into a specific position, are you still moving the actual player character, or a cutscene stand-in sprite while hiding the actual player? And are you interpolating his position through code or something to get him to snap to that point from wherever he triggered the cutscene from?
>And are you interpolating his position through code or something to get him to snap to that point from wherever he triggered the cutscene from?
This one. The movement for cutscenes will be done via code, although said movement is triggered in the timeline. I'm doing it like this because the tweener already takes their current position by default so I don't have to account for their initial position, just set the duration and the transition type
Another reason I'm doing it like this is because the Event Manager can be called during dialogue including triggering animations on characters and the current scene animation player. I made the cutscene in that webm in like 1 minute.
The sprites and animations are all contained in their character nodes, the event manager lets me change their current animation too (for this cutscene I just used a "stop" function I made that sets them to idle, kills their speed and sets their current direction too)
you should try to keep the 4 movement grid that UT/DR usually does, it rarely does diagonal movement during cutscenes
so first make the character move to the right X or Y coordinate while keeping the other as is then move the character in positions that are 90 degrees away from each other
* The animatedSprite2D is just the elevator. I'll be reasonable in animating other objects in the scene in a traditional way
And I forgot to answer, the node I'm using for the player controlled Clover and the Follower Ceroba are the same ones as the ones in the cutscene. They have different states meant for cutscenes or different situations that can be changed by the event and game managers (Making an NPC a follower is as simple as changing their state). Here are some for Clover
I could do that, I never noticed it so I didn't realize it was a thing but I can definitely make a method that works like that
Interesting, thanks. Personally I'm trying to think of a way where I can play out cutscenes entirely through the AnimationPlayer so it's easier to move sprites around in exactly the way I want rather than having to rely on the code.
Maybe I can do a hybrid of it so the code handles initial positioning/getting into place and the AnimationPlayer handles all the complex movements.
>Maybe I can do a hybrid of it so the code handles initial positioning/getting into place and the AnimationPlayer handles all the complex movements.
I think that is the best. I have an autoload called the Event Manager (that I also have to put in on the scene everytime unfortunately) and it has all those methods for me to use to trigger dialogue and move characters, change state and etc. The cutscene I made with Ceroba and Clover leaving the furnace
were done by simply moving their positions in the screen so that's possible too
Where in the scene is your AnimationPlayer located relative to Clover/Ceroba? As in, is it on the same hierarchy level as them?
Yes, it's on the same scene as the level. I unfortunately need an animation player on every scene with animation/cutscenes since that's what the Event Manager calls whenever it needs to trigger an animation. Having an animation player that auto generates on the spot with the necessary animations would be *way* too much work and it barely changes much so it wasn't worth doing some more crazy solution if something this reasonable is better. The event manager looks for the animation player with the group name "Animator" (or whichever one I send via the method) and calls the specified animation. I did it like this because it lets me call those methods during dialogue too
I see. In a few hours I'll begin trying out various things to try and find the most efficient cutscene-making workflow, thanks for the info.
I make good use of groups for my methods, they're very easy to set up, understand, and most relevant entities will be the single entities in that group. If there's a group with multiple entities (like followers) I can also treat it like an array of objects instead
Your dialogue is funny even though it’s just placeholder. You’ve got real talent
Sans in UTY in the Wild East and he goes by "Sans Sheriff"
frick you
It's Sans Yellow
eheheheheheheheheheheh
Man, I had a dream about Martlet. I can't even remember what it was about but I woke up with the hardest boner in my life... Martrot is real.
>You will NEVER wake up in the morning cuddling your birdwife
Life is just so unfair
It really is. I can't believe an undertale fangame made such a perfect woman. Top tier waifu.
>Tires screech to a stop as a man crashes his car into the side of a building.
>He stumbles out, coughing violently as various alarms and sirens blare throughout the city he finds himself in.
>Billboards used to advertise now have have "STAY INDOORS! AVOID CONTACT WITH INFECTED INDIVIDUALS!" plastered over them.
>He stumbles inside an empty looking building, thankfully nobody else is around.
>He breathes heavily, pulling out an infection leaflet from his coat pocket, while nursing his wounds.
>"Do not touch any item or object previously belonging to an infected individual. This includes feathers which infected inviduals shed- SHIT!"
>The man jolts up away from a few blue feathers that just so happened to be laying next to him.
>He backs up, thankful that he just avoided being infected, if he wasn't already...
>He bumps into something soft. He slowly turns around, a smiling blue bird stares down at them.
>"Heya! Gosh, why's everyone running away from me?"
>She reaches out to grab his shoulder with a wing, the man shrieks and sprints away, letting out a blood curdling scream as he discards his now contaminated jacket.
>Various confused looking blue bird women begin emerging from buildings around him, some talking with eachother while others begin walking after him, asking him for help.
>He can he hear them approaching, as he continues his mad sprint to safety.
There is no escaping her, mere visual contact is enough to turn you. Accept the martrot
Anthro fox Meira as Kiryu!
>Meira out of nowhere
Meirabroken.
Gonna work on my Yellow hard mode mod when I get home instead of being lazy
If it doesn't end directly at the end of the deeper ruins I will sue
it ends directly at the end of the regular ruins
there's a single fight against final froggit at the start and that's it
Toriel still scares it away before it can do anything too
Actually I'm kinda disappointed they didn't add this shitpost hard mode
What's the best Undertale font? Is it still Determination Mono?
I believe it's still Determination Mono but it's inaccurate with the uppercase W. Every other letter I know of is accurate.
just woke up, anyone have some requests i can doodle as a warm up and probably deliver next thread?
Ceroba if she final geno/JUSTICE/Vengeance boss
Martlet skating
Clover playing RDR2 with Starlo and getting REALLY into it
Anon dreaming of Martlet and waking up sad, lonely, and horny.
>Anon dreaming of Martlet and waking up sad, lonely, and mostly horny
fixed it for you brah
Ceroba drinking from "World's Best Mom" mug
And then Martlet comes in and says "hey, that's my mug!"
Clover playing Duck Hunt while a concerned Martlet watches
Since there’s too little Dina art, how about her with some thunderous thighs?
ceroba doing the pic related pose with the same black suit and everything, it would be good for future hidden OPs
Starlo being excited to finally have access to all the cowboys movie ever made on the surface
Kanako using heroin
Martlet opening her front door to find a horde of mishappen doppelgangers suffering from the final stages of Martrot
Bonus if they're all just different variations of her AU-style based on the original persons personality.
>Clover's also completely fine with this.
This but it's with Martlet (Peach) and Mooch (Klara)
Chujin trying some thigh highs
Momlet making an omlette
Clover staring at the viewer like this with golden eyes
Clover wearing the Silver Scarf.
You never drew Martlet's non Zenith bare ass
What would a TS!Underswap Yellow AU be like? Since it's implied that the Temmies are the seven fallen humans (including Frisk), then that means Clover becomes a soulless evil plushie
Well he would never leave the ruins for one, probably dies in Asgores arms after an accident and then that causes Asgore to flip to not wanting to kill humans.
Clover encounters Martlet, who's apart of the Navy and they have wacky shenanigans together.
Wouldn't the characters be swapped though? Maybe
>Dalv - Martlet
>Starlo - Chujin
>Kanako- Ceroba
Honestly? Frick that could work.
>Martlet lives in the ruins with Asgore as an inventor, really wants to work up the courage to start sailing but can't.
>Clover actually lives with them for a while after she meets them, they become extremely close.
>ASGORE finds out and after one thing leads to another, Clover and Martlet run away from him, only for Clover to fall into in the accident he keeps talking about.
>Martlet is fricking heartbroken that her adopted son has died and ASGORE becomes totally pro-human.
>Martlet possibly cares for Clover-Temmie as well
>Martlet possibly cares for Clover-Temmie as well
The Wrath Temmie?
>Martlet possibly cares for Clover-Temmie as well
>This scene from the Alarm Clock App Christmas update plays out but with Martlet and Temmie Clover
>Clover Temmie works with the other Temmies, although cares deeply about Martlet.
>The other Temmies like to use Martlet as leverage to stop Clover from doing crazy shit.
>Chara can encounter Martlet, who talks about their "adopted kid" a lot, although complains about them always being out with their friends.
>If Chara kills Martlet, wrath-Clover just instantly appears and kills them without warning.
I'm a Dalv swapping with Axis kind of person myself
Would Martlet even be around at the same age as Yellow in TS!USY? Yellow soul swaps with Cyan there, so Clover would be the very first human after Frisk died
No...
No Martlet no play
I'm inmune to Martrot
Because you have something much worse
Rude
>Because you have something much better
fixed it for yah bro
I love Ceroba so much.
Me too.
Ceroba's snout and ribbon here makes me think she's a mouse
Kanarot is raking over my brain.
same, need more cute fox childhood friend gf
Imagine Kanako sitting on your face. Imagine her tail waggling with happines while her butt presses with all her weight on your face. Imagine how soft her fluffy buttcheeks would feel against every inch of your face.
UTY fans after being exposed to cute furry women
cute BROKEN furry women
the broken part is very important because it leads to drama which ends with sweet comforting and new found love obtained through shared hardships
damn starlo is settling for the fish thbussy
>wildfire is naming the orange soul riley
I can see theboondocks jokes from here
Martletgays vs Cerobagays is just shitposting right? There's no actual rivalry is there?
Birdgays keep writing horrible things about Ceroba so ask them.
It's both funposting and a little rivalry.
Cerobagays are as dumb as their waifu.
Are you going to try and get threads deleted again like last time?
What?
I'm just gonna say that the Clover cucks Martlet with Ceroba GT was too sad for me.
You mean the one about Ceroba fricking his ass? Or was there another one that I missed?
Yeah that one. It made me feel uncomfortable.
That was abusegay shit though
What was Ceroba GT