LuisBrain's take on my starter

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  1. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    why do you keep posting your fakemon here
    do you not have a deviantart?

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Because I would like feedback outside of a hugbox.

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        >feedback for every fricking line or change
        You're not even making a game so just do us a favour and have a nice day

        • 10 months ago
          Anonymous

          Oh, let me you something. I'm working on a demo right now, mainly on maps.

          • 10 months ago
            Anonymous

            I'm sure you are, can't wait for it to never release

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        You don't care about feedback, you don't listen to anyone and you always change your design, never satisfied with your work

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        you might as well be in a hugbox since everyone on vp just says negative things and offers no meaningful feedback

        • 10 months ago
          Anonymous

          >keep posting despite feedback
          >pisses people off and they make it know
          > muh hateful /vp/!

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        You don't listen to feedback or you would have not done a fricking fursuit dog.

        Right now he looks like that episode of malcolm in the middle where his dad gets into speed walking

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        Just because feedback is harsh doesn't make it good feedback

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        >Commissioned a artist to try attempt at saving a failed concept
        OH NONONONO, WHAT A FRICKING moron

        >Constantly ignores feedback, and puts crying shiftiests like a toddler when people hate it
        You're a fricking hypocritical moron. You clearly want a hugbox AND you want your name out on fricking Ganker anonymous board.

        You will never make it. You're a fricking lolcow on /vp/ out of all places.

        • 10 months ago
          Anonymous

          A bit rude mate

  2. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    Frick off

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Never!

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Sneed

  3. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    Furbait

  4. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    >Wolf
    >Starter
    >Super Hero
    It got bad shillmon energy. Nobody here will like it.

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Would it be better if it was a frog?

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        It would be better as long as it doesn't look like fire Greninja nor a shillmon.
        If you are making a game, first show significant progress instead of pestering people with insignificant crap. Anons will be a lot more prone to help if you show them you are actually putting effort instead of attention whoring.

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        100% as long as its not some anthro scraggly frog. Make it a fat frick and it will be kino.

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        A fat flaming frog would be great, just made them quadrupedes and the designs should be fine

        • 10 months ago
          Anonymous

          Interesting

  5. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    Another member of incineroar's boyfriend harem, I will draw porn of them and report back

  6. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    How delusional is he? That design is unsalvageable. Have him do the grass one

  7. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    That would make a fine mega. However, the original design shouldn't change.

  8. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    I like it 🙂

  9. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    Why is a wolf used for a sentai-theme?

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Because dogs fit the hero theme?

  10. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    I'm not sure what you get out of these constant threads, most people draw fakemon for a hobby, for fun, but for some reason you're obsessed with pleasing everyone, which is impossible. Just draw what you like and don't worry about it being called good by some rando on vp of all places

  11. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    It's fogshit david and we told you that in the last thread and the one before that and the one before that. Go back to deviantart and fricking shut up about the game that'll never get done since you can't even finalize a design without nicking it from another artist.

  12. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    These threads remind me of that yanderedev guy now. For years before he became autistic with his scam game, he tried to shill this design of a girl wielding a scythe. He just kept making threads about her on Ganker endlessly, commissioning artists to get small detail changes on her.
    Maybe OP is trying to be another one of those lolcows?

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Well at least some fakemon artists get some easy cash

  13. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    Aw man dude, I think you should be the judge and the jury by now. It's harmless to ask for other people's two cents on matters like these (as dubious as /vp/ is), but when you're doing it for this long, you run into an awful and extremely common problem that I'm familiar with. You don't trust your vision well enough to follow through even after so many revisions. Not that its a bad thing to revise at all, but if you're making a whole romhack or fangame out of this, I can tell that production has stagnated to a screeching halt because of perfectionism. If you get bogged down by step 1 for this long, you eventually lose motivation and interest in whatever you're doing and end up getting stressed out. This is an exceptionally hard deathtrap to escape as a solo dev, and the best answers are either going through with it warts and all onto the next step, or scrapping it and starting over. And even then the latter option has the potential to start the same vicious cycle over again.

    If you do want to finish your fangame at a reasonable pace, I suggest going through with what you have right now. and lets not kid ourselves, if shit like Archaludon can pass the border these days, this thing doesn't have a single problem as a pokemon.

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      If we're skipping the usual /vp/ bullshit. I think they should just settle with whatever they have now and work on all the other pokemon. They clearly want this dog to be the mascot that everybody totally loves.

      But nobody is actually going to pick the furry dog because it's a furry. Not even the cool werewolf style. No it's the brazzilian fifa mascot style furry.
      It exists for porn that's it.

      You will never make a pokedex with all winners. Every gen has winners and losers. Even your favourite gen has a fist full of shit tier pokemon designs. Just work on something else.

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        >They clearly want this dog to be the mascot that everybody totally loves.
        Reading back on it, I do get that feeling. Even fan favorites like Greninja had their age of being boo'ed instead of cheered for. It isn't something that can be purposefully constructed, especially since we have so many shillmons that either don't make the mark or get shilled so much that they get significant backlash in return. People will have to organically warm up (heehaw) to the fire dog. But I do think it'll be liked by some if theres a game for it, furgays or otherwise.
        >You will never make a pokedex with all winners. Every gen has winners and losers.
        The gospel fricking truth. As a unova and johto gay, I have to specifically call out Lanturn and Gothitelle for being sUCH PIECES OF SHIT THAT CANT DO ANYTHING FRICK THEM

        • 10 months ago
          Anonymous

          You can't force people to like a thing.
          Take lucario, It got rediculously popular, so they tried to do it again the next gen, but it didnt work. Then they try to make another pika clone with that hedghog and everybody just loses their collective shit for the sentient cumsock.

  14. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    I'm just gonna go with this.

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Alright, whats next?

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Still shit, but better than the original image.
      Just make sure the beetle and turtle come out cool.

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        You guys remember the marine iguana line, right?

        • 10 months ago
          Anonymous

          The who? Also stop stealing designs, that turtle is a shit replica of picrel from the last thread.

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      I actually prefer this to whatever is in the OP. The art here is nice. Remember that every Pokemon has its fan, just some have more fans than others. Don't try too hard to pick or make a shillmon. Just get as much done as you can with whatever comes to mind first. You can revise in the future.

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Here's a revamped version of all of the starters. I know some people wanted Haliguana to be bipedal, but there's plenty of kaiju-based mons out there that are bipedal. Plus, there are kaiju that are quadrupedal, like Anguirus.

  15. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    I feel like you should stop asking people here for advice and just stick to one design. You aren't confident with what you're making so I understand why you want to revise it but it's better to work on more of your game and then come back to your design later. Stuff like this kills progress especially since you have to redo it's sprites.

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      Yeah, that’s why I have my eye on making the maps and events first.

  16. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    Don't make me post your resume again.

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      How did you get a hold of his resume?

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        He is a first name last name moron on discord and on his old deviantart accounts. He is laughably easy to track down.

        • 10 months ago
          Anonymous

          What's his DA?

          • 10 months ago
            Anonymous

            The ones I have seen are Gangstalizard950 and Cascalizard950, but I know he has been under a few more. He is under Shinkidink95 on discord now.

            • 10 months ago
              Anonymous

              Talk about obsessed.

              • 10 months ago
                Anonymous

                If you frequent /rheg/ you'd know he posts his stuff there a lot of the time. It's really not hard to track it down.
                But I agree, he is obsessed with his fakemons, he needs to build the damn game already.

              • 10 months ago
                Anonymous

                Talk about arrest. David needs to crawl his autistic ass back to deviantart and quit spamming the board with his shitty designs that will never end up in a playable state.

              • 10 months ago
                Anonymous

                Are you that b***h that keeps whining about mspaint art?

              • 10 months ago
                Anonymous

                Forgot to mention that he is that annoying homosexual in the drawthreads that keeps begging for any female character in a swimsuit.
                [...]
                Nope, but cope moron.

            • 10 months ago
              Anonymous

              Forgot to mention that he is that annoying homosexual in the drawthreads that keeps begging for any female character in a swimsuit.

              Are you that b***h that keeps whining about mspaint art?

              Nope, but cope moron.

        • 10 months ago
          Anonymous

          Calm down Satan.

  17. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    How much money did you spend on this game so far? Commissions can't be cheap.

    • 10 months ago
      Anonymous

      tell to "whoever bough these designs"

      • 10 months ago
        Anonymous

        My god David you could've probably hired some pajeet to code this out for you instead of getting like 10 commissioned pokemon.

  18. 10 months ago
    Anonymous

    Right now it's a matter of "get it done while you're still invested". Perfectionism will eat you alive, so it's better to get a draft done, put is aside to work on something else, repeat the process, then go back with fresh eyes to see what you can improve on the first thing you drafted.

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